it is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves.
people always run after making there own identity in the society.Everybody wants a special identity for themselves among the social groups they are linked with.these social groups can consists of various types of people like our friends,relatives or colleagues.And we depend on their views about us to define ourselves.
However I am not completely in favour of defining ourselves by what other people think about us, As I firmly believe that our personal views about ourselves matter the most.No one can understand us better than we do.Since in these age of social media we keep getting opinions from others we take them quite seriously and try to shape our personality accordingly without considering whether it is necessary or not.In order to develop a distinct identity among social groups we get bound to follow the so called rules and necessities of the society thus loosing our own unique identity.
In order to please the scociety we develop a sort of fake identity which main not necessarily reflect what we actually are, like the introverts start seeking answers and opinions from the outer world which generally doesn’t matters them nor do they imply them anywhere in life. All these is done to gain attention and importance from our social groups.there is clearly a large impact of our surrounding peoples on our behaviour and there opinions start bothering us.Surely everything what others think or belive about us not always true therefore we should try to figure out whats the best for us irrespective of what criticsm we might receive from the society.The example we can see at is of the people who are rich and powerful, they are always praised and acclaimed for there decisions by there surrounding groups but its not necessary that whatever they do is right, infact the real side of these groups are seen when the wealth and the power goes away.
us;mso-fareast-language:EN-us;mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">Finally I would say that yes truly our identity among the social groups do impact on how we define ourselves but it should not necessarily tbe he only mainstay to decide on what we are as our own personals views about ourselves also matters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, finally, however, if, so, therefore, thus, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 33.0505617978 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 358.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08659217877 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.61928507183 2.79657885939 129% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54748603352 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 71.0 23.0359550562 308% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 165.27383338 60.3974514979 274% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 364.2 118.986275619 306% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 71.6 23.4991977007 305% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.8 5.21951772744 322% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283445058006 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171583748425 0.0831039109588 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722212414826 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200616372399 0.150359130593 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455865212951 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.3 14.1392134831 271% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -0.59 48.8420337079 -1% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 12.1743820225 255% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.43 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.38706741573 127% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.4 11.2143820225 271% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.7820224719 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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