The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
since, in prevailing status-quo science is gaining more knowledge than every before, thanks to the revolution in science and technology in recent decade. Internet, social media, google has help to connected with in fraction of second among all people around the world. lot's of problem looks, apparently easier than it was before the forthcoming and ubiquitous of cutting technology. More over , swift pace of life due to recent technological advancement, not so much as panacea to problem but perturb to abide with swift of conundrum and quagmire people face in their quandary work. Meanwhile, we can attain online class for our degree, work from home for our home, we enjoy to book ticket of flight, book cab, order food in fraction of time, as result of serval application available in our smart phone. once these task seem to palaver. Even though, swift pace of life is quagmire, no panacea to all our problems, precipitate life is not only sole to engender to quality of life, but also prosperity, halcyon, advancement way we look for auspicious future and present.
Nonetheless, due to swift pace of life, people more prone to not only disquiet, let alone wane in social mental, physical and mental health. In particular, cricketer play lot more game than of former cricketer, which make them prone to injury, inadequate time for social life, today cricketer are under groan to play more matches as possible. furthermore, people now work in office for around ten hour a day, and when they are in home they still get message from their bosses to complete their work that is definitely difficult to deal with. people yearning to do progress, also create disbalance in their work and social life. Having said, we are able to fly japan to Nepal considerable of time, order food, book cap in fraction of second with the help of application present in our smart phone. All of these are concomitant to swift advancement in of prevailing condition. once to get doctor appointment we wait in line, on it is done through internet. consequently, precipitate in life leads us to better use of resources at our disposal, better health service than before.
Though, swift pace in life in panacea to all problem and it create entropy in life, we reap myriad advantage to solve problem and yearning to do better than pervious generation has done.
Mars mission to probe for possible life, transplant of organ are quintessential what swift pace in life has create for human being.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, consequently, furthermore, if, look, nonetheless, second, so, still, while, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 83.0 58.6224719101 142% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2060.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 417.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94004796163 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65648070259 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539568345324 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7103234456 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.176470588 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5294117647 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239592569464 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743088117374 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771522915204 0.0758088955206 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17537493487 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612497411524 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.