The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Our life on today’s world is completely bound with technologies and its applications. We totally rely on technologies and its utilitarian to live our life in rapid face with effectiveness. Due to embraced by the technologies, we are losing our mental ability to think and responses to the situation surrounding us. The above statement states the increasing rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves simply relates with its interdependency with the technology. I mostly agree with the above statement of increasing rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
Firstly, the technical advancement in automobile engineering along with its aesthetic design has made mankind to cross the speed limits easily with the help of good highway roads. Although, there are safety features like airbags and ABS module, the percent of accidental rates is not declining. The people love to challenge each other in racing in plain highways as well as in terrains which unfortunately lead to an accident resulting in death or injuries of riders and his co-partners. Similarly, the advancement in equipment related to mountain climbing such as wearing kit, suit and portable oxygen cylinder makes easier for climbers nowadays. Due to audacious or temerity nature of human, even they challenge high steep mountains in extreme conditions resulting in death or injuries of number of climbers.
Secondly, the technical advancement in medical field is impressable. Once thought untreatable disease is now resolvable through the progress in medical field. For instance- Cancer causing cells are now controlled with the treatment of chemotherapy or radioactivity rays. However, during the treatment of cancer patients some doctor may accidentally come in contact with the waves of radioactive particles resulting in uncontrolled cell division or proliferation of cells and finally causing cancer. Similarly, the increasing use of pesticides and insecticides has resulted in increasing the vulnerability of pests towards pesticides resulting in damaging of large amount of crops.
Thirdly, the extreme use of internet has a boon for student in twenty first century. You can easily browse the problems that you are unaware of solving through various internet sites. The site lists out a lot of solutions of a single problem which makes us lackadaisical in using our mind to solve it in our own way. We are lacking our availability to think properly to solve the problem of today’s world and totally depend upon the internet for a proper remedy. Similarly, in today’s world, kids are passionate towards the use of internet and use various applications of teaching, gaming and entertainment enormously. The children are keen to play online games rather than outdoor games which increase obesity and weaker in physical strength. Similarly, the children are expressing their thoughts in social media vividly whereas they fail to express their ideas during direct communications.
However, the technological boons have made our life easy and convenient. It helps us to make our impossible dream possible and realistic. Due to advancement of technology in mobile networks, one can send messages to his friends and colleague from one corner of the world. Due to invention of supersonic jets, one can reach from one part of the world to another in a limited time period. But, the haphazard consequences of technical invention are high enough to control such as due to radiation of mobile network services, many birds are going to extinguish. Due to high speed supersonic jets has caused sound pollution resulting in death of people due to heart attack and agitation.
In conclusion, the consequences of rapid pace of live has emerged many new problems rather than solving it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 64, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-first
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Line 4, column 77, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
... has a boon for student in twenty first century. You can easily browse the problems tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, third, thirdly, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 105.0 58.6224719101 179% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3189.0 2235.4752809 143% => OK
No of words: 600.0 442.535393258 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.315 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94923200384 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98573971851 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 317.0 215.323595506 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528333333333 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 1008.0 704.065955056 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 14.0 4.99550561798 280% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3434524828 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.965517241 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6896551724 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.51724137931 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.13820224719 253% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242566874861 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601882153824 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861061637836 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11501102509 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905986244608 0.0667264976115 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 166.0 100.480337079 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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