Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Law, by definition is the legitimation process of regulation to keep peace and prosperity of the society. Law are particularly amenable during the establishment of constitution in the country. Law particularly holds different system of constitution in a single unit and release its power to bring peace and prosperity in the society. A society is dynamic in nature undergoes changes in every realm, every day. How can a law with its rigidity can guide a complex and dynamic society like ours? So, I mostly agree with the topic as laws should be flexible to bring change in the society that takes place over a period of time, at different location and in varied situations.
Firstly, time is dynamic rather than static. As society changes regularly with the passes of time. People with its varied culture and tradition are the bodies of the society. With the passes of time, people face with new challenges and limitations and these limitations are overcome by the flexibility of laws. At one time, these laws were capable to hold the people within its boundaries but, these same laws are unable to bind large diversified population living in different geographical area creating advantage to some privileged society rather than holding large no. of population.
Health, education and employment are one of the basic needs of this futuristic society. New diseases like ebola, covid 19 need new method to cure and new awareness program to prevent societies from deadly virus. The old system and laws were unable to hold large number of population health as new health system need new laws regarding establishment new physical infrastructure, rescheduling of available manpower and new medical labs to combat these diseases with new research and development. Similarly, these old education systems may be biased enough to teach student from different societies, so amend of laws needed to embrace technology based education which may be the need of new emerging society.
May be violation of laws are the result of incompleteness of these prevailing laws system. Therefore, criminals are active enough to violate the laws of children as well as women rights through kidnapping, sexual abuse etc. So, new laws should be implemented properly to punish these criminals acts with severe punishment acts. These acts need to be made so offence that new criminal minded person thinks 10 times before doing them.
However, it is difficult to occupy and please large population under a certain amendment of law system. These new laws to be amenable have to pass from the house of representative and through public voting. It takes time for amenable from different societies and groups. These laws particularly focus for futuristic purpose and should not be changed frequently.
Therefore, laws should be flexible enough to act in various circumstances with different time frame, it however, should still be associated with certain constraints and be done after analysis of its importance and taking into account the future possibility of change.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ishment of constitution in the country. Law particularly holds different system of ...
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Line 1, column 610, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... in the society that takes place over a period of time, at different location and in varied si...
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Line 2, column 45, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ly, time is dynamic rather than static. As society changes regularly with the pass...
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Line 4, column 79, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'laws'' or 'law's'?
Suggestion: laws'; law's
...t of incompleteness of these prevailing laws system. Therefore, criminals are active...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, similarly, so, still, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 82.0 58.6224719101 140% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2553.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 490.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21020408163 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83017079382 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487755102041 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 827.1 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9238868146 60.3974514979 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.375 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190030078565 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060020126351 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598204187335 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12367471882 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623811642816 0.0667264976115 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 100.480337079 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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