It is more harmful to compromise one’s own beliefs than to adhere to them
From my point of view, sometimes, it is best to adhere to other's beliefs when it comes to consideration of group communal utility or prevention of damage the relationship of each other. However, it is encouraged to express our opinion; even, we may compromise other's belief when the circumstances involve some ethical issues or our own benefits.
It's more appropriate to place ourselves behind others when we work in a tea. As a team of members, we surely have different ideas or beliefs. Nevertheless, sticking to our own ideas won't help to deal with problems successfully. Instead, it will only result in total chaos. Not only can't the problem be dealt with, but also there will be some fights between each other, which results in an unpeaceful atmosphere between each team member. For example, it's common to find that there are always different opinions about what the direction of the country should be led to between each political party. However, often, no party is willing to hold their opinions back in order to make things work out more successfully so that inefficiency of the government is what we get in the end.
Nonetheless, when the situation involves some ethical or law issues, we certainly need to insist on our own beliefs. For example, if a good friend of yours asks you to steal things from convenience stores, refusing him is the best policy. In addition, if we face the circumstance that will make you feel really uncomfortable,
it is advised to say no and consider your own benefit first. For example, imagine there's a race tomorrow and you just hurt your knee. However, your teacher still wants you to participate in it for the honor of the whole class. Hence, in this case, the last thing you is to obey your teacher's opinion. You need to insist on withdrawing from the race for fear of increasing the severity of your wound and stick to your own benefits rather than let others compromise your utility.
All in all, whether sticking to our own beliefs or not really depends on the different situations we are faced with. Carefully deciding how we need to react is a really important thing that we have to learn by heart.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 282, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ll only result in total chaos. Not only cant the problem be dealt with, but also the...
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Line 4, column 83, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...own benefit first. For example, imagine theres a race tomorrow and you just hurt your ...
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Line 4, column 268, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...Hence, in this case, the last thing you is to obey your teachers opinion. You need...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, really, so, still, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 374.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75668449198 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66427851279 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55614973262 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7309394105 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8333333333 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118094102131 0.243740707755 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349418637275 0.0831039109588 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405552888287 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0662236199574 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379795501504 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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