Everyone wants to be as healthy as possible. Fortunately, in modern society there are many things that people can do to improve their physical condition. What do you think is the best way to stay healthy?
• Get exercise on a regular basis
• Eat healthy food every day
• Visit a doctor for regular examinations
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Having longer life should be attribute to the increase attention for human on their heath. There are different aspects that people thinks it matters most. Some might think getting exercise on a regular basis or visiting a doctor for regular examinations are more important for our health, while others consider it's better to having nutritious food to stay healthy. From my point of view, I support the latter.
To begin with, eating healthy food can prevent us from having chances of getting exposed to unhealthy or toxic chemical. There are lots of fast food with substances that harm our body. If we usually take these food as our meal, it may damage our health swiftly and getting disease more likely. However, by replacing unhealthy food with healthy meal, we don't have to worry about our body because we directly avoid those harmful substance. For example, there are lot of news about people having hamburgers every day and getting cancer in the end in such a young age. Nevertheless, if people choose to have healthy meal such as salad or eating stewed food instead of fried food, it can directly avoid those unhealthy chemical, which is a more straightforward method to stay healthy. Hence, eating healthy food might be most efficient way considering having a healthy life.
Last but not least, consuming food that is beneficial to our body can strengthen our immune system. As we know, having enough nutrition and taking healthy substances can help our body become stronger and be able to prevent from the attack from variety of diseases. For example, children living in Africa died much more easily than any other children in the world. Being lack of enough healthy food is the most significant factor. If there's no enough nutrition, it's hard for body to build a firm immune system to prevent from the attack from bacteria or virus. This results to a bad health condition and dying early in the end. Hence, having a healthy diet is a more fundamental and necessary way for pursuing healthy life.
Irrefutably, some might asserts that getting exercise on a regular basis or visiting a doctor for regular examinations are more important in keeping our health. They think that exercise regularly can keep our body stronger from virus or bacteria and visiting a doctor can help us examine the detrimental disease such as cancer as soon as possible to prevent from death. However, what they neglect is that having healthy food is more rudimentary. If we don't get enough nutrition, we are not obliged to discussing how other things can be done to further fortify our health. Also, eating healthy food is an active way to protect our health, while visiting a doctor or exercising are more passive methods. They are more like a compensation to our body for taking unhealthy food. Hence, to stay healthy, having healthy food might be the best solution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, while, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2373.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 485.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89278350515 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48067887266 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465979381443 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 740.7 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3408745166 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.92 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273964348198 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946822754968 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069987233914 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184197941081 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457499945471 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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