Everyone wants to be as healthy as possible. Fortunately, in modern society there are many things that people can do to improve their physical condition. What do you think is the best way to stay healthy?
Getting exercise on a regular basis
Eating healthy food every day
Visiting a doctor for regular examinations
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Staying healthy is the critical important task for people in modern society. There are several ways to improve our physical condition. Personally, I believe that the best way to stay in shape is to visit a doctor for regular examinations. There are two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, visiting doctor for regular examinations could let people know their body accurately. Everyone has different condition of body, so the plain to improve the physical will be definitely not the same between people. For example, my mother went to see the doctor for losing weight five years ago. After pregnant, my mother's body had a huge change, so she kept failing by using the basic and traditional methods. The doctor gave my mother the specific examinations by using the novel technologies and tracking the body changes every week. At last, my mother finally loses enormous of weight and every indicators of her body recovered to normal.
Secondly, visiting doctor costs money that might be a benefit for improving the physical condition. Everyone is cherished for money, so paying the money could make people be more concentrate and determine to achieve the goal. My experience is a best illustration of this. When I was in college, I had tried lots of different ways to improve my health, such as eating healthy food and doing exercise on a regular basis. However, all of these became failure, because lots of attractions kept distracting me. During the diet, I felt upset of could not hang out with friends to enjoy the delicious meals. As time passed, I would give up. Exercise on a regular basis was even harder for me. There always had lots of excuses in my mind to forcing me skip the day of doing exercise. Finally, when I got to visit doctor for examinations, it is quiet a burden cost for a college student. I followed the instructions from the doctor strictly every day. I was so afraid that I failed at last, because it cost me enormous money. Fortunately, I reached the goal and improved my physical condition successfully.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that visiting the doctor on the regular basis is the best way to having big progress in physical condition improvement. Because doctor could make you know your body more and keep tracking on your body changes. Moreover, the money you spend on visiting doctor could be an important stimulation of the improvement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, you know, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2013.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8859223301 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70829741173 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514563106796 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1158926894 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.4230769231 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195044724065 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564398466129 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645776402927 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130818420329 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557922852513 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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