It is more harmful to compromise one's own beliefs than to adhere to them.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
I hold it true that, in most circumstances, it is better to adhere to one's own beliefs than to compromise them. However, if you are in a team and an amoral decision opposed to your faith has been made, you should compromise your beliefs to coordinate with others.
The world is very complicated, so everyone should have a ruler in his or her mind. If one does not have some beliefs to comply with, one is likely to be lost when a storm besets. If this is the case, you may hurt not only yourself but also the community you belong to, such as a company or a government.
Take Morris Chang, the founder of Taiwan Semiconductor Manufacturing Company (TSMC), for example. Decades ago, he decided to double the amount of investment in more advanced technology. Many employees demurred at the decision, regarding it as a waste of resources due to the low return on investment of new technology. However, despite the difficulties, Morris Change was intransigent since he knew that the only way to stand out from the crowd in the competitive IC industry is by technological advantage. Several years later, his decision proved correct. TSMC outperformed Samsung, and until now, TSMC is still leading the world.
On the other hand, if the whole team makes a decision, it is more suitable to comply. United, the team is more likely to succeed. Otherwise, the team is more likely to fail. Every member of a team has the responsibility to comply with the policy they collectively set.
In a basketball team, the coach has the power to decide the strategy they should use. As a player, your responsibility is to comply with it. If you are still opposed to it, the performance of the team will surely decrease. Before the decision, it is suitable for the player to express concern about the decision. However, when the coach makes a decision, compromising one’s own belief is a better option.
Nonetheless, if the team one belongs to has decided against justice, one should stand out. In the Second World War, the Nazis have done a lot of egregious activities such as genocide. Being a governor, the responsibility for human beings as a whole is more important than the loyalty to the state. If most people had always had a conscience and refused to compromise their own beliefs, they could save many innocent lives.
In general, it is better to adhere to one’s own beliefs than compromising them. Nevertheless, if the team one belongs to has made a decision that is not at odds with justice, it is more suitable to compromise one's own beliefs to coordinate with others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, regarding, second, so, still, for example, in general, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2132.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 446.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7802690583 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8266527225 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491031390135 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 681.3 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 3.10617977528 354% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9838508813 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.0 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26923076923 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270165617894 0.243740707755 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713309599428 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735875278751 0.0758088955206 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14676410899 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941761964905 0.0667264976115 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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