Some gifts we receive are particularly special to us. Why?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Gifts are symbols of human bonds. Human relationship is invisible, but we can’t live without it. Therefore, we often utilize tangible objects to transfer our feelings. This is the meaning of gifts.
Throughout a person’s life, he or she will certainly receive many gifts. Nonetheless, some gifts may soon pass through our memory, leaving no traces behind. On the other hand, there are few gifts that will be etched in our memory. The value of this kind of gifts lie not at the price but the stories behind them. It is the stories behind the gifts that make them unique.
In my opinion, our lives are weaved through a series of stories. No matter their sizes, these stories will constitute our experiences and shape our memories. From this perspective, a gift is a story. These stories record the different aspects of lives. For example, a birthday a gift may remind me of a wonderful birthday party and the friendship with my best friend. Nonetheless, I believe that the most valuable gifts are gifts that remind us of the good old times, a time that is so wonderful that we will never forget but is eternally past that we can never live again.
My most memorable gift is a gift from my caring, loving, and always smiling grandmother. When I was in high school, my grandmother started to show the symptoms of Alzheimer’s disease. She forgot almost everything, but she always remembered my name. One day, she took a clay model out of her shelf, and she gave it to me with a huge smile. It was the last time I saw her smile. Years later, her health deteriorated, and she could hardly speak. During summer vacations, I would go and see her, and I couldn’t figure out if she still remembered me. I would hold her hands and look into her eyes, hoping to find traces of happiness and warmth, but there seemed to be none. I realized that Alzheimer’s disease had separated my loving grandmother from me ruthlessly. Nonetheless, when I take a look at the clay model, the image of my grandmother will appear, calling my name with smiles.
We all receive gifts, but the most special gifts are those that remind us of a wonderful time, just like the gift I received from my grandmother.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, nonetheless, so, still, therefore, for example, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64690721649 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62977925313 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536082474227 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2747872336 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3461538462 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.19230769231 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134477928399 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373187367805 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530851824163 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106565198118 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727536112455 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.