It is more harmful to compromise one's own beliefs than to adhere to them.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Belief and ideas have been a critical issue in the life of individuals and play a vital role in our mental lives. Thus, I agree with the statement which asserts people should adhere to their beliefs and compromising is harmful. I will explain my ideas for two reasons and an exception.
Compromising our own beliefs could be harmful because it defects our positons and self-confidence. When people hide their beliefs or compromise them, it shows that their ideas are not important for themselves so, how they assume they could be important for others. For example, an employee who hesitates to maintain his idea in the meeting destroys his position or when he compromise his belief when the boss does not support him, he would lose his self-confidence.
Moreover, defending and insisting on our beliefs, help us to show ourselves as a dependent person and it helps to improve our ideas. When we insist on our beliefs, some may attack them with a counterexample or counter-argument that shows flaws in our ideas. Then, we can think about that attack and try to improve our beliefs.
On the other hand, some believe insisting on our ideas would not the best in all of the time. Since sometimes our beliefs may be fallacious and insisting on that idea seems ridiculous. For example, in the past decades, women could not vote for choosing a president or parliament member. Adhering to this belief could eliminate the ideas of half of the population and foolish. Thus, by changing the minds and beliefs of people the regulation has been improved.
In conclusion, I agree with the assertation most of the time because it augments to position and self-confidence of individuals and could show flaws of our ideas to improve them. However, there are some exceptions which are some times that compromising and correcting the ideas would be beneficial.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 373, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'compromises'.
Suggestion: compromises
...eeting destroys his position or when he compromise his belief when the boss does not suppo...
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Line 4, column 78, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ting on our ideas would not the best in all of the time. Since sometimes our beliefs may b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, as for, as to, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 311.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93569131833 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87660431943 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511254019293 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.904279112 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9375 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.21951772744 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154551604724 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584278873075 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537383181925 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982189780303 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563300715861 0.0667264976115 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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