It is more harmful to compromise one's own beliefs than to adhere to them.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
I hold it true that in most circumstances, it is better to adhere to one’s own beliefs than compromising them. However, if you are in a team and a decision that is not related to morals and is opposed to your beliefs has been made, then it is better for you to compromise your own beliefs to coordinate with others.
The world is very complicated and everyone should have a ruler in his or her mind. If one does not have some beliefs to comply with, it is likely that he or she will be missed when a storm besets. If this is the case, you may not only hurt yourself but also the community you belong to, such as a company or a government.
Take Morris Chang, the founder of Taiwan Semiconductor Manufacturing Company (TSMC), for example. Decades ago, he decided to double the amount of investment in more advanced technology. He was met with a lot of opposition since TSMC had already gained a position in the IC industry and the investment was seen as a waste of resource due to the low payoff caused by the uncertainty of new technology. However, despite the difficulties, Morris Change was intransigent since he clearly knowed that in the competitive field of the IC industry, the only way to win is by the ascendancy of technology. Several year later, his decision proved correct. TSMC outperformed Samsung and until now, TSMC is still leading the world.
On the other hand, if you are in a team, and a decision has been made, it is more suitable for you to comply with it. United, the plan is more likely to succeed. Divided, the plan is more likely to fail. Every member of a team has the responsibility to comply with the policy they set.
In a basketball team, the coach has the power to decide the strategy they should use. Being a player, your responsibility is to comply with it. If you are still opposed to it, the performance of the team will surely decrease. Before the decision is made, it is suitable for the player to express the concern about the decision. However, when a decision is made, compromising one’s own belief is a better option.
Nonetheless, when you are in a community and the decision at variance with justice has been made, you should stand out. In the second world war, Nazi has done a lot of egregious activities such as genocide. Being a governor, the responsibility for human being as a whole is more important than the loyalty to the state. If most people had always had conscience and refused to comprise their own beliefs, it would be likely that lots of innocent lives could be saved.
In general, it is better to adhere to one’s own beliefs than compromising them. Nevertheless, if you are in a team and a decision that is at odds with justice has been made, it is more suitable for you to compromise your own beliefs to coordinate with others.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'trues'?
Suggestion: trues
I hold it true that in most circumstances, it is bette...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, so, still, then, for example, in general, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 39.0 19.5258426966 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2307.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 505.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56831683168 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71559738726 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.431683168317 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 738.9 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.10617977528 322% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3786193344 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7307692308 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4230769231 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321477651338 0.243740707755 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902764830423 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931808210871 0.0758088955206 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192249166912 0.150359130593 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115733582559 0.0667264976115 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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