• It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
RESPONSE :
Humans are judgmental beings. We judge a person as soon as we get a minor piece of detail about him/her. Nowadays, our tendency of reacting before ruminating has increased and the media has become wily of it. The media will show anything, which it considers would spark heat among people, and we, believe it without evidence. The statement put forward by the author that it is no longer for the society to regard any living being as a hero because of the media is true, but there are some aspects of it not contended by the author.
Hero, after all, is a human being and human beings make mistakes, but it depends on us how we perceive that mistake. Hero or a role model doesn’t have to be someone, who is perfect. Nobody’s perfect and we all make mistakes, one of them is being injudicious. A person may be adored by one person, but not by the other person necessarily. It is a very subjective word and everybody has different definitions of it. Someone may consider a person to be a hero if the media touts him, while the other person may consider someone to be a hero who is not a public figure and does the good deed without recognition and public approval. For instance, a feminist may not be a hero for one person, but may be a role model for the other. Similarly, a veterinarian, a doctor, a policeman, soldier, and alike are all role models for some but not for the others.
It doesn’t take a minute to find fault in someone. It depends on us, who we want to adore and, who are abominable to us. As said before, nobody is perfect. Everybody seem nice and sweet at first, but it is when we go deep into knowing about their lives, is when we find their true self and media plays this role very well. It gets so involved in some people’s lives, that even the nicest of the person tends to lose composure and flap. As most of us do not want to put ourselves in their shoes, end up judging them erroneously, without knowing their true self.
In contrast, there are some, who act sanctimonious in front of the media and belie about their overall personality. But these are some extreme cases, which happen rarely. With time, everyone’s true personality becomes permeable in the society. Succinctly, everybody has faults and it depends on us what we want to consider and prioritize. For example, Mahatma Gandhi, father of our nation, who helped India, achieve independence from the British rule, is considered a role model by several, but some after knowing his personal life and his personal deeds, loathe him.
Therefore, it is our own perception and judgment, which separates a hero from a non-hero. Media, albeit, has a big role in altering our perception doesn’t always provide with false or “too-much” information. It also helps us know about people’s works, lifestyle and good deeds done by them. It helps us motivate us to be or not to be like them and judge sagaciously about what is right and what is not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, similarly, so, therefore, well, while, after all, for example, for instance, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 14.8657303371 209% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 33.0505617978 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2433.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 528.0 442.535393258 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60795454545 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79356345386 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61096036048 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 215.323595506 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492424242424 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 787.5 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.77640449438 507% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.0005314596 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8928571429 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.10714285714 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116056177287 0.243740707755 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0303344550616 0.0831039109588 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725306279755 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0656796639456 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657539703714 0.0667264976115 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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