It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Heroes are the people to whom we look up to and like whom we aspire to be. Usually many of us have heroes in the respective fields that we work or in the fields like acting. Everyday we make endeavours to become like them one day. The prompt here asserts that it is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as hero. I strongly disagree with this statement for two reasons.
Firstly, Many of us still consider some people with the level of scrunity that these people undergo by intensive media. With the advent of intensive media, we became more aware of lives of our heroes. This media follows these heroes lives very closely and they report even a minor incident in their lives as a breaking news. This just tells us that even today we still regard some people as our heroes. For instance, Let us take Mahatma Gandhi who is father of Nation of India. Mahatma Gandhi went through a lot of scrutiny by these media personalities and every incident and move of him's was reported to public. Even after undergoing this amount of scrutiny many of us still regard him as a hero in our life. Thus this example illustrates even today how some people are regarded as here.
Further, Let us take one more example of Sachin Tendulkar who is still regarded as god of cricket. Sachin is still regarded as hero by many aspiring cricketers. He is well remembered for debuting into international cricket at the early age of 16 and then breaking many records. For his whole life he went through a lot of scrutiny by media and still he was unstained. This example illustrates that how people are still regarding some people as heroes.
Lastly, However, it may be true that fame of some of celebrities was destroyed and they were not regarded as heroes anymore. For instance, let us take of example of politician who is being regarded as hero for quite a sometime now. Lately, people discovered that this politician is involved in scam which loots nation of some huge amount of dollars.
His reputation may be destroyed and he may not longer considered to be hero.
In conclusion, some may argue that some heroes reputation was damaged and they were no longer considered as heroes. However, we still regard many people as heroes in this modern socity. If the statement doesn't include extreme words like "any living man or woman" the statement would have been true.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective, and the comma is missing. Did you mean 'every day, we'?
Suggestion: Every day, we
...t we work or in the fields like acting. Everyday we make endeavours to become like them one...
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Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'follow'.
Suggestion: follow
...ware of lives of our heroes. This media follows these heroes lives very closely and the...
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Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'breaking news'.
Suggestion: breaking news
...even a minor incident in their lives as a breaking news. This just tells us that even today we ...
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Line 3, column 711, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...still regard him as a hero in our life. Thus this example illustrates even today how...
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Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the celebrities') or simply say ''some celebrities''.
Suggestion: some of the celebrities; some celebrities
...y, However, it may be true that fame of some of celebrities was destroyed and they were not regarde...
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Line 10, column 41, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'heroes'' or 'hero's'?
Suggestion: heroes'; hero's
...In conclusion, some may argue that some heroes reputation was damaged and they were no...
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Line 10, column 204, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...in this modern socity. If the statement doesnt include extreme words like 'any li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, look, may, regarding, so, still, then, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 422.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67298578199 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4341234073 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450236966825 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.9 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.0243002065 60.3974514979 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.88 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.88 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305267859557 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949087938048 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152631885421 0.0758088955206 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17311012932 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978487440653 0.0667264976115 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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