The author claims that in cities a nation’s traditions is more generated and preserved. I do mostly agree with the authors’ statement. The cities contain more information about the history of an nation, through the museums and the architecture. Further, a higher concentration of the people live within the cities, which reflect the daily life of the people of a society. Still, some traditions might be seen much regularly and less biased in the country side, due to less immigration and a higher value of these traditions.
First, in the cities is a higher concentration of national traditions through the museum, public buildings and the general architecture. Those infrastructures are a good reflection of the culture of a country. If a foreign wants to learn something about the culture of a nation, he will probably receive a more complete impression, if he visits the main cities of this nation, than when he visits the country side. National museums tell the story of the foundation of a nation and about its past. Also through restored national buildings, like the old library, the university or the market place, one might get an view into the traditions and history of a nation. Because the most of these buildings have been build, where today the big cities are, are the cities a good place to look at, if you want to learn something about a nation’s traditions.
Further, in the cities there are living most people of the society. Therefore, you might get the best impression about the mindset and the behaviour of an society through visiting cities. Also big festivals and traditional ceremonies are celebrated much more often within the cities. For example, Carnivals are in many cultures important traditions, which are celebrated in every country a little bit different. Although these carnivals are also celebrates in the country side of countries, it will be more representative for the entity of a society, if you attend such a festival within a city. On the country side, these festivals include often a more regional touch and do stand more for the region than for the whole society of a nation.
There are also some situations, where the country side show a more original picture of a nations’ traditions. Like explained before are also festivals hold in smaller communities, which may should a more accurate picture of a nation. Further, through the many people that move into the big cities, some original traditions might get lost. Cities become more and more multicultural and therefore the cultures mix up. In the country side, there is less immigration, where maybe some traditions are remaining much longer than in the cities.
In essence, if you want to learn something about a nation, you should rather visit the big cities. Through the national museums, the architecture and the national celebrations within a city, one might receive an impression, how this society developed and lives nowadays. Still, there are some traditions, which will be celebrated more in the country side of a nation, where they have less influence of immigration and therefore some traditions might have a higher value to them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...n more information about the history of an nation, through the museums and the arc...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'want'?
Suggestion: want
... the culture of a country. If a foreign wants to learn something about the culture of...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ndation of a nation and about its past. Also through restored national buildings, li...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
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...sity or the market place, one might get an view into the traditions and history of...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... about the mindset and the behaviour of an society through visiting cities. Also b...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... of an society through visiting cities. Also big festivals and traditional ceremonie...
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Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...which are celebrated in every country a little bit different. Although these carnivals are...
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Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put before the verb 'include'.
Suggestion: often include
...y. On the country side, these festivals include often a more regional touch and do stand more...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, may, so, still, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2630.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 521.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04798464491 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77759609229 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81706076599 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.399232245681 0.4932671777 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 838.8 704.065955056 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6200703894 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.2 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.84 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206827138768 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682712822801 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396241682715 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133643051975 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262861962405 0.0667264976115 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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