A main character in Our Time, the most welcome Taiwanese movie, said "We are the only one who can define ourselves." It seems that some people believe that we could always define ourselves instead of our social group. However, since human beings are social animals, we actually need emotional bonding for life; thus the point of the statement is convincing and persuadable.
People need to communicate with others, and those who we get along with can always form who we are. That is to say, people tend to do things properly in their social group in order that others will prove them and be fond of them. For example, An American TV show, gossip girl, vividly shows the life of the rich living in the upper east side of New York. The main character Serena always tried not to act like a rich. However, what she wore were all about Chanel, Dior, and what she talked about were all related to summer vacations in Paris. That is because she is living in a millionaire family, the people she lived with all behaved elegantly and sometimes pompously.
In addition, people like to imitate others, and social group is a optimal learning environment for us. For example, when I was at senior high school, most of students at that time liked to wear Converse shoes as it was a kind of avant-grade symbol. I got several Converse shoes even I did not feel comfortable when wearing them. But I was proud to be a "Converse walker" in high school. For another example,
Admittedly, some critics argue that people can still decide the way they want to be as human have consciousness, they can chose to become who they are, especially when they are in lower social status. For example, the prior Taiwan president, Chen Sui Ban, grew up in a poor and rural village of south Taiwan. His mom always told him he should go ahead to work after graduation. Nevertheless, he dedicated himself to study and successfully entered the top university in Taiwan; after several contributions in his political party, he finally became Taiwan president.
To sum it up, most people still tend to behave like where they belong, though some people who are in bad condition will try to get rid of their group and define themselves with their own motivation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... to imitate others, and social group is a optimal learning environment for us. Fo...
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Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the students') or simply say ''most students''.
Suggestion: most of the students; most students
...mple, when I was at senior high school, most of students at that time liked to wear Converse sho...
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Line 5, column 352, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...hen wearing them. But I was proud to be a 'Converse walker' in high sch...
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Line 5, column 418, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...os; in high school. For another example, Admittedly, some critics argue that peop...
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Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'choose'
Suggestion: choose
...e as human have consciousness, they can chose to become who they are, especially when...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, thus, for example, in addition, kind of, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1864.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 391.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76726342711 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58888723429 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572890025575 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1206592222 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.647058824 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 5.21951772744 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115943110656 0.243740707755 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357586382364 0.0831039109588 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394168074589 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685675732749 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438521130131 0.0667264976115 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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