Laws are system of rules and regulations which helps to maintain peace and harmony in a society. This a topic of debate among different political parties whether to make laws flexible enough to make changes according to the different situations or not. I agree with the former one, the laws should be adjustable as per the situation and should be in pace with changing time. I would like to explore this in the following essay.
First and foremost, laws give sense of security to people of society. There are different laws according to the type of crime committed. However, punishment should be given keeping in mind the intention of a crime being committed. For example, whether a crime is done intentionally, by mistake, or just for fun. There are various aspects which has to be taken into consideration by judge before giving punishment to a person. Thus, the laws should be flexible so that various circumstances are taken into account.
Besides this, taking examples from history there are many laws which are changed with time. For example, China has one child law in order to control the nation's population. According to this law, every couple should have only one child. However, after the earthquake, the Chinese government is thinking to revise this law. Therefore, laws have to be changed for the progress and development of society. Moreover, with change in time, law related to property distribution to the heir of family have changed. Earlier, elder son or sons of the family had right to the parent's property. But, with time women started asking for their share in the parental property. So the laws changed and now all children have equal right on parental property. There is also new concept of will of the dying person. As per will property is distributed. It is clear that with changing time it is necessary to make amendments in laws.
Last but not the least, defined laws help judges to make correct verdicts. But, there should be some flexibility that should be given to them. I would like to explain this with the help of an example. Same crime is committed by two persons, one person committed it intentionally for money and other person committed it in self defense. In such a case, flexibility in laws provide judges to make cogent decision keeping in mind the circumstances.
To conclude, laws should be flexible enough to make it easy for judges to make correct decision. In this way society will prosper and also justice will be served.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...s one child law in order to control the nations population. According to this law, ever...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
... or sons of the family had right to the parents property. But, with time women started ...
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Line 5, column 798, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ew concept of will of the dying person. As per will property is distributed. It is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2058.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 422.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87677725118 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61287490973 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485781990521 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 652.5 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9820387322 60.3974514979 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.9655172414 118.986275619 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.5517241379 23.4991977007 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.06896551724 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219075665624 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614048793176 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507455334067 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134983335559 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195379114458 0.0667264976115 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 14.1392134831 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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