Some people like to stay entire life at one place, on the other hand some like to move from one place to another due to various reasons. With the advancement in transport technology travelling has become easier, thus giving opportunity to the people to explore the world. The statement mentioned above is hot topic of debate nowadays among the scholars. I personally prefer to travel to various places rather than staying at one place. There are many reasons to it, few of which I am going to explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, in order to get good job opportunities one should be open to travel at different places. To have job satisfaction it is better to move from your hometown and grab the chance and enhance the career. For example, my brother moved from his home town as he was getting good job offer at different city. The previous job he had was not paying him well according to his education. Moreover, he was not happy with the work culture of the organization. So it was a very good decision for him and his family as he was not happy in his professional as well as in the personal life. Thus, it can be said that one has to travel from one place to another as per the requirement of the job.
Besides this, people use to move in search of better and safe community. If the place you are living is not good and safe than it is preferable to look for other places to reside. I would like to shed light in this with the help of an example. My friend's home town is not a safe place to live. The town is famous for criminal and mischeivious activities. Additionally, the girls are not safe there, so her family decided to move to a place which has safe and good environment for their children. Many people migrate from one country to other because of same reasons as given above. The best example to give here is Pakistan, this country is suffering from problem of terrorism and we all are aware of this. The examples give suffice reasons for people to move from one place to other in search of better lives and community.
Last but not the least, there are many reasons for people to travel different places. Nowadays, people are moving in order to explore the world and different cultures of the society. Due to the advancement in technology it has become easier to get the knowledge of various places and culture which make people more curious to explore it. Therefore, people are travelling to get the experience of different culture of the societies. Sometimes it is the weather of the place due to which the folk decides to stay there. Thus, it can be said that due to many reasons it is better to travel number of places than to spend your life at one place.
In a nutshell, there are myriad number of explanations for the people to move to different places such as to have better job opportunity, in search good life and community and to explore the world and culture are few reasons that substantiates my point to choose this side of the topic.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 97.0 52.1666666667 186% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2448.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 544.0 407.700716846 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82947280553 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47915182505 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.404411764706 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 806.4 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.333307169 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4285714286 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310853125325 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886475172925 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764204105116 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175594906328 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642076519455 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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