Young adult is an age when a person despite of being confused likes to make their own decision. They do not like much interference in the life. This is a hot topic of debate nowadays among the scholars. In my opinion at this age young adult should not stay with parents. There are many reasons to this out of which I am going to explore few important aspects in the following essay.
First and foremost, living alone makes you responsible in every sphere of life. Living with parents does not gives you chance to take any responsibility as they have solution for every problem, on the other hand in living alone you have to solve problems on your own which makes you responsible. I would like to share my personal experience. I started living alone in my higher school days. At first it was very difficult for me handle every situation on my own, but gradually I learned to tackle my problems. By the time I had to take admission in the university I was a responsible person whereas other students who were living with their parents were not very much groomed. I believe that sooner or later you have to take responsibilities of your own, so it is better to start experience this at right age.
Besides this, independent living makes you problem solver. You no longer fear to face problems be it any trivial issue or a problem which requires exigent solution. This skills helps a lot in order to make progress in the life and especially in job. For example, one of my friend who still live with his parents has problem in solving any issue on his own. He need to take his parents help for the mundane problems, due to this he is not able continue his job for more than few months in a company. It is better to become independent as soon as possible.
Finally, in my opinion the person who lives alone is a good decision maker. Living independent gives you freedom to take your own decisions. In my early days of staying separated from my parents I took many bad decisions but I learned from those mistakes and eventually I became judicious. Wrong decision leads to bad experience but you are getting furbished with the time. When you take decision whether it is right or wrong you are the one who is responsible and accountable for it nobody can be blame for it. In this way you becomes wise.
In a nutshell, it is better to stay independently as it makes you responsible, a good decision maker, problem solver and at the same time it makes you strong, I believe that in life these aspects are important to learn.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...e of life. Living with parents does not gives you chance to take any responsibility a...
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Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...roblem which requires exigent solution. This skills helps a lot in order to make pro...
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Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'help'.
Suggestion: help
... requires exigent solution. This skills helps a lot in order to make progress in the ...
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Line 7, column 529, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'become'
Suggestion: become
...dy can be blame for it. In this way you becomes wise. In a nutshell, it is better t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, if, so, still, whereas, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2068.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 458.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51528384279 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55520837395 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478165938865 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 676.8 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7071423439 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.72 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.32 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.96 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251606995821 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718445726959 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521745593147 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137812036164 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232350698677 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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