Everyone has goals in the life. The goal gives purpose to the life. We all dream to fulfill our goals. But achieving the goals are not that easy. Nobody achieves the goal overnight. I totally agree with the statement that we should never give up and should not stop working towards our goal.
To fulfill the goals one has to struggle hard. It is not walk on the cake to achieve big goals in the life. There are many examples of the people from the past that proves that we should not give up our hopes by facing failure to achieve something. There are many scientists who made inventions by failing myriad number of times. Thomas Edison is a perfect example to look up to in this context. He failed several times before he invented the bulb. But he did not get hopeless by facing problems and rest is the history, today everyone knows him by his name.
From my personal experience I have learnt that it is not that simple to achieve something big in life. If you are getting something easily that is not your main goal. For main goal you have to struggle hard and have to face many problems before reaching the main goal. I was preparing for GRE from past one and half year. I had attempted the examination for three times before getting the marks that are required to get admission in a good university. The path was not easy for me, but I never gave up the hope and worked hard for it. Because I knew that giving up means never be able to fulfill my dream to get masters degree from a good university. So I worked hard and finally got good marks in the GRE. And by that I am one step closer to fulfill my dream.
One should never give up dreaming big goals in life and should work hard towards that goal. The goals in life gives meaning to it. Without goals there is no excitement or purpose in the life. There is no fun in leading a bland and dull life. We are not suppose to get afraid of difficulties or struggles in the journey to achieve the desired goal otherwise we will never be able to taste fruit of success. Giving up means always having regret in the life of not able to achieve the goal. So one should not get upset or frustrated by the failures and should try and try until the final aim is not achieved.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...imple to achieve something big in life. If you are getting something easily that i...
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Line 5, column 536, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ave up the hope and worked hard for it. Because I knew that giving up means never be ab...
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Line 7, column 254, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
...ading a bland and dull life. We are not suppose to get afraid of difficulties or strugg...
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Line 7, column 558, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...r frustrated by the failures and should try and try until the final aim is not achieved...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28436018957 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17174891279 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.436018957346 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1122541628 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.3448275862 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5517241379 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.13793103448 5.45110844103 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218205758552 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580084644848 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075459277335 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139421001934 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615710172101 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 11.7677419355 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.95 10.9000537634 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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