Nowadays, advertisement plays an important role in promotion of any new product launched. This is hot topic of debate among scholars that for a business to flourish, a significant amount of money should be invested in it or not. I believe that advertising is important for a business to become successful and due importance should be given to it.
First and foremost, a new product launched needs promotion and this can be done via advertisement. Working people listens to the radio and house makers watches television a lot, these medium can be used to advertise any thing which is new in the market. For example, if a new product is launched in the market than an advertisement enlightens the customers regarding it. Awareness among people makes the product about 20 percent popular and there are chances that people going for shopping can purchase that product as they are familiar of it because of the advertisement.
Besides this, an advertisement helps in saving money. This can be explained with the help of an example, if a new restaurant is opened, and it is promoted through advertisement than there is likelihood that people go to try the food. If they like the service,food and ambience than more people will come to the restaurant. Thus, the restaurant will become popular and it can purchase it's grocery in bulk so that they can get it for reasonable rates, as purchasing groceries in large amount saves lot of money. In this way money can also be saved with the help of advertisement.
Finally, nowadays, be it any product there is cut throat competition in the market. There are many different brands of a single product available in the market. It is important for the new product to be promoted well, for this advertisement comes into the picture. In order to beat the competition, advertisement has always been a good option. Once the product becomes famous, it's selling covers almost all the money invested in the advertisement. Moreover, after the product is well known among the people it also gets promoted through mouth word of the people. Therefore, there is no need to invest more money in the advertisement as the business is getting free promotion.
In a nutshell, as aforementioned, advertisement plays a crucial role for a business to do well in the market. Additionally advertisement do the promotion, helps in saving money, and is important to beat the competition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2005.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95061728395 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00813711271 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451851851852 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1868541211 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4761904762 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47619047619 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133233706462 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507129794544 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469731846279 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919422105969 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342478070454 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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