Young people are future of the society and their contributions are important for the betterment of the community. In today's world, it is a point of debate among people from all walks of life whether the younger generation is helping the society or not. While, some hold great ideas in believing that they are not doing enough for the society, the others, however, accept that they are contributing towards the humanity. My opinion is tilted towards the latter, the reasons for which I am going to explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, the younger generation is very much involved in the inventions and researches in order to help the mankind. The inventions are done to make the life more easier. There are many researches going on to cure the disease like AIDS, cancer, and chikungunya are few of them to name. All these hard work are put to help the society we live in. Thus, it can be said that young adult are doing good to help their community.
Besides this, nowadays young people are involved in doing volunteer work which was not common earlier. The volunteer work is done to help the society without any selfish reason. I would like explain this with the help of an example. Back in my country I had enough time after work so I decided to teach the slum children and joined a NGO for this cause. I did this voluntarily to help those under privileged children so that they can also get some basic education. Many of my friends also joined this cause. The point I am trying to make is that young adults are contributing their time for betterment of the society.
Last but not the least, the young adults are very much involved in their own startups. This provides employment for many people. This is a big contribution to the society as unemployment is very common problem faced by almost all the communities. There are many examples of the young people who successfully started their own company Mark Zuckerberg, Ellon Musk are few to name. They are giving jobs to thousands of people. Therefore, today's generation is contributing their time and efforts towards societies.
In a nutshell, the younger generation is doing enough to help their community by doing inventions and research, by getting involved in volunteer jobs and startups thus, making their contribution towards the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82706766917 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58242189302 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461152882206 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 597.6 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5606692072 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7391304348 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.347826087 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86956521739 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208821396846 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599769843812 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047730788776 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126994661167 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255295909754 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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