Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer? Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
Both live in one place throughout life and move different places to live are advatageous for a human. However, staying in only one place in my entire life is not my cup of tea. Thus, I prefer to move from my hometown to the other unknown places for several reasons as I can access new job opportunities, I would like to meet people having different mentalities and I like to explore places that I have never been before.
Initially, it is clearly believed that only one place is lack of job opportunities. Someone having dream about an exellent career, is supposed to search for various places which contains varieties in terms of job oppurtunities. Therefore, if hometown is the only choice to live, then career dreams, most probably, turn out as the hometown would not plenty of different kind of job opportunities. On the other hand, moving to another place makes it, from all intents and purposes, easier to meet new societies and opportunities. Thus, new career chances are existed by moving from hometown to another city.
Moreover, people aware only about society which are located around them. This compound area limits to be introduced by different people mentallities. When new life area is selected by occupants, they commence to know eachother from day by day. They don’t only begin to know eachother, but they become familiar about the mentallities they have as well. Therefore, people move to another place to leave become aware about different kind of living styles. For instance, while I was studying in high school, everyone having education in the same school, was on the same way in terms of life expectations. However, when I met with university community, I found out that new friends from different societies affected my mentallies asthey have different life styles.
Finally, as person being, I would like to explore new places. However, this is not possible by living only one place. Moving somewhere else gives me the chance of exploring new exiting places. Even moving from somewhere located in the same country would not be enough to explore new places. People should move to another countries to explore different kind of environment, climate and historical places.
All in all, life is excellent when we try to explore it. However, staying in one place can not give the opportunity to carry out it. Eventually, I infer from that we need to move to another places to have new job opportunities, know different life styles and experience new places to see.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2084.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97374701671 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73097359968 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45584725537 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 677.7 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3253566266 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6086956522 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2173913043 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08695652174 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165084083013 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583714759724 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504447246814 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10894443526 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565249221911 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.