Is it more important to be able to work with a group of people on a team or to work independently? Use reason and specific examples to support your answer.
Both being a part of a group for a work and work alone to carry out a work are advantageous for success. However, working individully is not my cup of tea. Thus, I prefer work with a team instead of working independently as my group mates can complete my absent points, we supply motivation to eachothers and we can turn out the work faster than expected.
Firstly, in my opinion, team work’s best advantage is that team members would do cross check for a successful work. As every person is available to do mistakes, it is needed to have someone else to control the wrong points and mistakes. It is easier to find out the mistake done by another mate since everybody has different perspectives. For instance, in a lecture that I took last year, we had a group project and it was quite succesfull acording to our teacher. However, one week later than this assessment, we have done individual assessment but it was an abysmal one because of the mistakes that I couldn’t realize. Therefore, I prefer work with a group for a significant work.
Moreover, motivation is the most significant factor for a work to be a successful one. It is believed that good team mates can supply motivation to the other members of the group. As they are following the team mates works, they motivate themselves thank to the other mates. It isn’t just for supplying motivation but it is benefical to work with group to defend and give morale as well.
Finally, it is well established that due date is important for every work. Working with group is easier in terms of timing. While some of group members arrange the program and infrastructer of work, rest of them can pay attention for searching crucial information about the work. That makes work turn out faster. However, in the individual work, occupant must carry out all the work that must be done. Thus, the risk of overshooting the due date is existed.
All in all, group works are always the more successful ones because it is easier to figure out a mistake thank to the other members of the team. Furthermore, Achieving a successful work is possible with morale which a team can supply and in terms of time management, team work is advantageous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74093264249 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75955261003 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474093264249 0.524837075471 90% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7664926621 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1428571429 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.380952381 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04761904762 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326989359929 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121430484978 0.076458572812 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851192936205 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220399498193 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568097274527 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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