Is it more important to be able to work with a group of people on a team or to work independently? Use reason and specific examples to support your answer.
Both being a part of a group for a work and work alone to carry out a work are advantageous
for success. However, working individully is not my cup of tea. Thus, I prefer work with a team
instead of working independently as my group mates can complete my absent points, we supply
motivation to eachothers and we can turn out the work faster than expected.
Firstly, in my opinion, team work’s best advantage is that team members would do cross
check for a successful work. As every person is available to do mistakes, it is needed to have
someone else to control the wrong points and mistakes. It is easier to find out the mistake done by
another mate since everybody has different perspectives. For instance, in a lecture that I took last
year, we had a group project and it was quite succesfull acording to our teacher. However, one week
later than this assessment, we have done individual assessment but it was an abysmal one because
of the mistakes that I couldn’t realize. Therefore, I prefer work with a group for a significant work.
Moreover, motivation is the most significant factor for a work to be a successful one. It is
believed that good team mates can supply motivation to the other members of the group. As they
are following the team mates works, they motivate themselves thank to the other mates. It isn’t just
for supplying motivation but it is benefical to work with group to defend and give morale as well.
Finally, it is well established that due date is important for every work. Working with group
is easier in terms of timing. While some of group members arrange the program and infrastructer of
work, rest of them can pay attention for searching crucial information about the work. That makes
work turn out faster. However, in the individual work, occupant must carry out all the work that must
be done. Thus, the risk of overshooting the due date is existed.
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... of tea. Thus, I prefer work with a team instead of working independently as my g...
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...can complete my absent points, we supply motivation to eachothers and we can turn...
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...omplete my absent points, we supply motivation to eachothers and we can turn out the w...
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...urn out the work faster than expected. Firstly, in my opinion, tea...
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...tage is that team members would do cross check for a successful work. As every pe...
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...is that team members would do cross check for a successful work. As every person ...
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...ble to do mistakes, it is needed to have someone else to control the wrong points...
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...o do mistakes, it is needed to have someone else to control the wrong points and mi...
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...s easier to find out the mistake done by another mate since everybody has differe...
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...ier to find out the mistake done by another mate since everybody has different pers...
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... instance, in a lecture that I took last year, we had a group project and it was ...
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...ance, in a lecture that I took last year, we had a group project and it was quit...
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...ording to our teacher. However, one week later than this assessment, we have done...
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...ssment but it was an abysmal one because of the mistakes that I couldn't rea...
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...t but it was an abysmal one because of the mistakes that I couldn't reali...
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...k with a group for a significant work. Moreover, motivation is ...
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...for a work to be a successful one. It is believed that good team mates can supply...
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...tion to the other members of the group. As they are following the team mates w...
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...k to the other mates. It isn't just for supplying motivation but it is benef...
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...oup to defend and give morale as well. Finally, it is well est...
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...arrange the program and infrastructer of work, rest of them can pay attention for...
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...l information about the work. That makes work turn out faster. However, in the in...
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...ormation about the work. That makes work turn out faster. However, in the indivi...
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...nt must carry out all the work that must be done. Thus, the risk of overshooting ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93413173653 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7498594229 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505988023952 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1474955379 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7368421053 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5789473684 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.53405017921 441% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 35.0 5.5376344086 632% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305405012096 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11516946441 0.076458572812 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866087190169 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109471079535 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851137062107 0.0645574589148 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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