In the contemporary society, numerous bad activities happen in each and every sections of it. Hence, to give the proper judgments pertaining to those illicit happenings, there are certain jurisdiction boards, courts that operate based on certain laws enforced by the constitution of the country. The judgement given based on these laws by the judge of the courts will be either good or bad based on the happenings around that particular case put forth by the lawyers. Therefore, to give such well defined judgement there must be consideration of all the facts as well. The laws must also hold good and mappable enough to the judgement given according situation that took place. But to think to tune the existing laws under certain factors which were used to judge the former cases in a successful manner is a questionable statement.
Illicit things can take place either accidentally or if the person carry out them will fully. The place, time, and the circumstances are very capricious with respect to each and every event. But, considering that if we want to change the laws according to each and every circumstances then that would make the laws ineffective and increase in number of laws. This leads to corrupt the mindset of lawyers unwittingly. They will be glad to slide their clients out of the case or alleviate their punishment periods taking a rift point of the law. For example, In India the very infamous “2G spectrum scam” or the “Commonwealth Scam” in which the politicians bagged several thousands of crores of black money into their pockets and using the loop hole of law of the biggest democracy in the world, got settled. Hence, the laws if are strong enough, need to be constant and should not be tweaked.
Similar to the corruption cases’ judgments, one of the infamous case of “Nirbhaya”- the heinous rape case of a young woman from Delhi by few younger boys can be attributed to the failure of the law when it is tweaked. The case was closed by granting the life sentence to the boys but except one who was declared to be adolescent and was just fined for his acts of iniquity. This was the epitome of ineffectiveness by the law as it was tweaked long before that the crime by younger aged (below certain age) were to be treated differently then others with respect to sexual harassment. Considering this case, if the laws are tweaked based on certain factors then it might tend to be in effective.
Considering the quality of the laws the quantity of the cases too matter. Despite of good number of jurisdictional bodies in the country, the ill acts' cases in any of the given countries will be higher in number. Considering the case of the 'Al-Quaida" terrorist the notorious Kasab Ahmed who was kept in the jail in an opulent manner for more than 500 days by the Indian Supreme court. Even though after obtaining the information from him about his act in Mumbai attacks in 2008, it took many days for the government to give him the sentence to death. This was quite dis respective for the victims of the case. If this substantiation is considered, the statement given can be thought again to come to the second opinion too.
In a nutshell, the laws on which the beliefs of the citizens of certain country relies upon have to be unchanged with respect to situations. Considering the cases of scams as well as the rapes (such as Nirbhaya) we can say that the judge who gives the final decision has to be in a position to understand the situation. Therefore,the situations have to be mapped into the laws and further the judgement has to be given.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 110.0 58.6224719101 188% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2992.0 2235.4752809 134% => OK
No of words: 625.0 442.535393258 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7872 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.0 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82771381862 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 304.0 215.323595506 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4864 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 928.8 704.065955056 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.38483146067 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9951920937 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.076923077 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0384615385 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249472794508 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677429622067 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062310710914 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145272683665 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808295455556 0.0667264976115 121% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 140.0 100.480337079 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.