Laws should not be rigid or fixed. Instead, they should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.

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Laws should not be rigid or fixed. Instead, they should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.

Laws are the basic principles made by us, it is important to have them since rules maintains morality and peace among people. Moreover, people should know their limits and in process of being
liberal they should not violate privacy and hurt others. Laws should not be rigid since we are progressing day by day, situations change and what would have correct in past might be crime in present, moreover might be harmful for others. Therefore, laws should be flexible enough to be applicable in all circumstances and time.

To begin with, it is very much important to realize that laws are made by us, when time comes we should not be obstinate to change them if it is necessary. A law cannot be same in all circumstances it varies according to intention behind the person committing the crime. For instance, if an adult has murdered someone then the according to the law he could facing an judgement passed by judge either it would be prison for life or hang to death. However, if the person is an juvenile then our jurisdiction provides him another chance by sending him to school in jail and try to rectify him.

Secondly, it is very much important to have liberal and democracy supporting laws. Because in the past there many laws which did not support gender inequality and where not reasonable. For example, In the past most of the countries where against gay and in some countries it was severely harsh. In Germany Hitler ordered to kill all homosexuals, he thought it is against nature.

Thirdly, Laws which went ignored in past and didn't find necessity, should be implemented in present if required. For example, There where no laws for industrious pollution caused by us. However, later people realized the extent of damage it is causing to our environment and that these changes are permanent. If we continue in the speed, it wont be far that there wont be any life present on earth.

To sum up, We should consider that rules are made by us and not to be tentative to change it, we should try make laws which support equality and free from partisan, it is not necessary that rules ignored in past should be implemented if required in present and punishments should be congruous according to the situation in which the crime is committed and all scenarios should be taken into consideration before passing an judgement.

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Average: 6.2 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...now their limits and in process of being liberal they should not violate privacy ...
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... then the according to the law he could facing an judgement passed by judge either it ...
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...he according to the law he could facing an judgement passed by judge either it wou...
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...ang to death. However, if the person is an juvenile then our jurisdiction provides...
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...ail and try to rectify him. Secondly, it is very much important to have libera...
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...taken into consideration before passing an judgement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 405.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78024691358 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61370125159 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503703703704 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.3010770524 60.3974514979 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.882352941 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8235294118 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 5.21951772744 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330399390381 0.243740707755 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108562093507 0.0831039109588 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114074825529 0.0758088955206 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187152046449 0.150359130593 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118187317447 0.0667264976115 177% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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