Laws should not be rigid or fixed. Instead, they should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
I partially agree with the given statement regarding flexibility of law considering the circumstance, time and places as it offers more significant advantages than the trivial disadvantages it has.
Firstly, flexible laws offer many advantages. It lead to quicker justice. It also causes the result to be more accurate. There might be situation where the flexibility in the law is necessary to arrive at the correct conclusion. In this fast moving era of technology, the old set laws and rule might not work well at some places though most of the times they will. The laws can be changed, altered or modified according to a particular circumstance, time and place. e.g. If a person met with car accident and needs to be hospitalized immediately. The law says that a police complaint must be filed before he can be admitted to hospital. The chance of casualty remains to be high in such cases. Instead, the law should be made flexible so that the victim can be hospitalized as soon as possible so that his life can be saved.
Moreover there are many cases where the law needs flexibility. e.g. a farmer who's farm recently faced a draught. The basic compensation should be made before the full compensation from the government so that farmer can continue his daily life. For full compensations government may require to conduct surveys of the area. On the same lines, over-speeding is not allowed at all. But if someone is carrying a critical patient in his/her private vehicle due to unavailability of the ambulance, law should be flexible enough to allow him commuting above certain limit.
On the other hand, many thieves and robbers can take disadvantage of this flexibility. Politician can misuse this flexibility and incur mass corruption. So, the flexibility of the law should be kept into its limit that pure Justice is achieved always and no one misuses it at the same time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: leads
...flexible laws offer many advantages. It lead to quicker justice. It also causes the ...
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Suggestion: Moreover,
...ssible so that his life can be saved. Moreover there are many cases where the law need...
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Suggestion: who's
...he law needs flexibility. e.g. a farmer whos farm recently faced a draught. The basi...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'compensations'' or 'compensation's'?
Suggestion: compensations'; compensation's
...r can continue his daily life. For full compensations government may require to conduct surve...
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Message: Did you mean 'conducting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: conducting
...ll compensations government may require to conduct surveys of the area. On the same lines,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, e.g., first, firstly, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 319.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92163009404 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91206541801 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583072100313 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.8262752141 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.95 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.21951772744 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388301295575 0.243740707755 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103433426184 0.0831039109588 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815655554963 0.0758088955206 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209151607275 0.150359130593 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099248970972 0.0667264976115 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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