Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Policies that focus on protecting environment should not be imposed upon multinational organizations as they generate profit and boost the economy; even though they cause damage to the environment.
The given statement of policies that focus on protecting environment should not be imposed upon multinational organizations because they generate profit and boosts the nation's economy even though they cause damage to environment seems logical at first but is not fundamentally correct. I partially disagree to the given point.
In today's word of rapid technology-business growth and due to increasing international business competition every company, be it a small newly started venture or be it a well established MNC, makes use of environment as its asset in one or the other way to generate the revenue and profit. This revenue is, no doubt, is essential for growth of the nation's economy as whole, but shall not sap the environmental prosperity that mother nature has given to us.
The MNCs, being the largest contributors to the nation's economy, consume the natural resources the most. While doing this they, knowingly or unknowingly, damage the environment in one ot he other way. But the thing that these MNCs should keep in mind is that environment comes before the profit and economy. If there was no environment, natural resources etc. their businesses will not survive. And to have control on their environment related activities some policies shall be imposed on to them. E.g. Tata industries in India deals in various sectors viz. Steel, automobile, IT. While pursuing their business goals they use various environmental resources. e.g. electricity, land etc. To have a control over their activities the government has imposed various policies that do not hamper the companies growth and the environment either.
If the MNCs are not restricted to use the environmental resources, they will use them at their demand and will. It might be the case that the companies exploit the natural resources in order to seek maximum profit. And eventually will eventually hamper the environment. But if very strict laws are imposed on them they might not be able to work with the full efficacy. This will, over the time, make the national economy weak.
In conclusion, the MNSs shall be imposed upon necessary policies that protect the environment but also not very stringent that it causes decreased efficiency and performance. Both the things, the economy and profit should go hand in hand leading to sustainable development.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...use they generate profit and boosts the nations economy even though they cause damage t...
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Line 3, column 349, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...o doubt, is essential for growth of the nations economy as whole, but shall not sap the...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that mother nature has given to us. The MNCs, being the largest contributors...
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Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
..., being the largest contributors to the nations economy, consume the natural resources ...
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Line 5, column 549, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sectors'' or 'sector's'?
Suggestion: sectors'; sector's
...ta industries in India deals in various sectors viz. Steel, automobile, IT. While pursu...
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Line 5, column 585, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ous sectors viz. Steel, automobile, IT. While pursuing their business goals they use ...
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Line 5, column 798, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...various policies that do not hamper the companies growth and the environment either. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, e.g., first, if, so, well, while, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1964.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 376.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22340425532 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95250620536 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521276595745 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 70.7315960352 60.3974514979 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2727272727 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0385398968909 0.243740707755 16% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0111674257052 0.0831039109588 13% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0174126903929 0.0758088955206 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.024971053159 0.150359130593 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168738973625 0.0667264976115 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.8971910112 172% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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