Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them.
As we witness many great eminent, reverent leaders in past and recently- Nelson Mendala, Mathama gandhi, whisten churchil, Barack obama and many others in history of world. so, what is leadership and how we can define leadership which is certainly matter of contention. Moreover, leader are created by demands that are placed on them is basically fall under comprehensive defination of leadership, implying that leadership is to take from place A to B , act accourding to situation. Nonetheless, leadership should be parochially defined to avoid any moot, leader is someone who take from position A TO position no one has ever imagined through not only vison, gumption but also of conviction.
However, rife corruption and capricious nature of government in certain country give birth to more corruption free leader, which certainly quintessential that leaders are created by demands that are placed on them. For instance, there was rampant corruption in state of NEW DHELI, state of india. pedestrain are fade of situation, want leader who resolve these ongoing conundrum. Guy name arvind kejerewal, widely obscure in indian political spectrum, from aam admi party got elected as chief minister of dheli. since, demand of public id to remove the corrupt incumbent government. furthermore, defeat of incumbent in general election simply as they fail renage what they had promised, new leader get elected accourding to demand of common public. still, there many leader in serval field like sports, big cooperate, in politics , tech-giant; they become leader in their respective field not accourding to the requirement of the situation but of their vision, acumen and conviction. In particular, every big tech-giant main objective is profit, so that person who is deft to achieve such object can be elevated to rank of top leadership. Steve jobs became leader of apple -technological giant, because he want to make apple most valueable company of world in technology, even most of employee of don't comply with that idea, only jobs was convinced with that and eventually, he made apple as most valuable company of the world, which nither of his employee nor his rival company has ever imagined.
such idea are not demand of situation.
Consequently, leader are formed by the requirement placed on them. if we perceive leadership in more eclective way, leader must be formed by accourding to myopic approach to leadership.
for example, Mahatma Ghandi lead the movement of independence against colonial and despot British regime, many pedestrain belief, it was impossible to fight ;but, Mahatma ghandi not only being audacious but also visionery lead to the independence of india.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, still, for example, for instance, in general, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2257.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 426.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29812206573 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84376702181 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582159624413 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 711.9 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.4002882084 60.3974514979 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.764705882 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0588235294 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05882352941 5.21951772744 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321485792032 0.243740707755 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109620507833 0.0831039109588 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13962036776 0.0758088955206 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166167955187 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930256323604 0.0667264976115 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 100.480337079 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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