Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
People follow leaders because they believe that leaders can lead them to a promising future or results. Before accepting anyone as a leader people do try and check whether the person, who they think, is going to be their leader may or may not be eligible to fulfill their expectations. Once they think that a person expecting to be a leader, is capable of leading a group or ideology , they do have some demands and they do expect that these demands could be fulfilled by their leaders. From all this explanation a point is clear that a leader is selected first, off course with due process, and then their followers have some expectations or demands to be fulfilled by them. Thus the given statement is not completely agreeable that leaders are created by the demands placed on them.
This claim can be further analyzed with the help of some examples. Consider a case of election, lets say election for a senator. Senators are expected to be a leader of a community and represent the community on larger grounds. Do think about a process how a senator is selected, they are selected by the people of the community. Normally, there are more than one nominee for the senate race. They each try to prove themselves as a promising leaders. They, themselves have to study the important issues and problems in the community and they have to propose a draft about how they are going to lead the community in towards a more prosperous way. They need to convince people how effectively they will be able to do it and then on the day of election their fate is decided by the people. Community collectively decides who seems to be more promising to be their leader. Once the leader is selected, people in the community do expect the leader to work towards fulfilling their demands. This scenario shows that followers of any leader only have demands to their leader if the person has shown the ability to be a leader.
Furthermore we, we can consider another scenario where a leader is selected by someone else to lead a group. For example, in a technical firm, employees normally work in teams and effectively they have a team leader to lead them and represent them at a higher authority. In this case, team members do not select a team lead, he or she is selected by higher authorities. To think a little about the procedure how they select a person to lead, they first think about the requirements and check among the available candidates. If they find any promising candidate, they select the respective person as a leader to lead particular team. Now the team members hardly have any idea about hoe the team lead is going to perform as their leader. Even if they do have demands to be satisfied by the leader, for example , team members may wish that their leader understands their issues and try to give them some solutions. In this scenario there are many aspects for a leader to be a leader in real sense. He or she has to fulfill the expectations of higher authorities as well as team members. It totally depends upon the person and his circumstances which makes him a true leader.
As discussed above , if we take in to account the example of a team leader in a technical firm, it can be said that, because the person leading the team is not completely prepared to act as a leader or to lead a group of people in order to be successful in the task assigned to them, it is possible that as the team members do have some expectations form their leader, he or she might try to understand their needs and try to act on them . As a result, after a certain period , the person may become a really efficient leader. In this case, the stated claim can be considered true. But, as we already discussed that whoever getting selected as a leader needs to have some leadership qualities before getting into the job of a leader.
It can be concluded from above mentioned examples that followers of any leader do have some demands, which they expect their leader to fulfill, but it is not necessary that those demands make the person a true leader. At first the person needs to have some leadership qualities and then he or she needs to try to fulfill the demands passed over effectively.
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...ll the demands passed over effectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, really, so, then, thus, well, as to, for example, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 37.0 19.5258426966 189% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 82.0 33.0505617978 248% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 97.0 58.6224719101 165% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3427.0 2235.4752809 153% => OK
No of words: 748.0 442.535393258 169% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58155080214 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.22968341894 4.55969084622 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5704344419 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 215.323595506 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.362299465241 0.4932671777 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1093.5 704.065955056 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 6.24550561798 272% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.5155618445 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.09375 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.34375 5.21951772744 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106899840828 0.243740707755 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413545503456 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409382652193 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803499750694 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017841050454 0.0667264976115 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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