Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Any society needs a set of rules and regulations to keep functioning successfully. Hence, governments have the already set laws as well as they keep adding to the list, new laws, so as to accommodate it's people's best interests. According to the given statement, every individual in a society has the responsibility to follow the set of laws imposed by their governing peoples. It is people's moral responsibility to obey the laws, may they be just or unjust. To decide, whether a law is just or unjust, does totally depend upon the perception of an individual. But to disobey laws which a person feels to be unjust to him or her, can not be the answer. Every governing body has their own reasons to design a set of rules. An individual person may feel a particular law is not in their best interest, but one should keep in mind that rules are designed for everyone. A society includes a large number of people, every law set by authorities can not necessarily be suitable to everyone. Hence, just or unjust, people of the society should first obey the rules and after that if they feel if the particular law is not in their or majority of society's best interest, they should find proper ways to protest and try to change such laws.
As mentioned above, rules and regulations are set after considering best interest of the people. But, the society for which the laws are set, is not limited to a group of people. As the number of people increase in a society, the different set of opinions about good and bad increases. Every individual may have their own perspective about a particular law. For example, the current trending topic in American politics is about it's immigration laws. Few people think existing immigration laws are injustice to the local communities and few other people think about immigration laws on humanitarian grounds and think that these laws are in best interest of America as a country. Now, as per given claim if people who does not agree with this set of laws just disobey and start treating people coming from other countries badly, it will surely create a chaotic situation and a national level tragedy. Of course, people who wants to oppose these laws, may have their own reasons. If these people follow a more better way to put their thoughts as a community to a person representing them and ask the particular person to put forward those explanations further to the proper government channel, they might see at least some favorable changes without disrupting the peace.
Furthermore, governments need to have the balance in the society in order to prosper, hence they need to deliberately design a system of law, which they know will be doing injustice to some people. For example, to allow industrialization near a residential area is of course not in the best interest of the residents but because governing bodies need to consider economical growth of the society as whole, they need to allow growth of industries knowingly, near residential areas. In such scenario, residents of the nearby area can not ask owners of the industries to not build factories their. That would definitely be the wrong way to show opposition to the particular rule. Instead, going through proper channels will always help.
Normally there are ways available to common public to convey their thoughts on the laws which they think are not suitable for them. If there is none, a society should try and develop it, as it is the best way to indicate your opposition to any law, just or unjust as per one's perception. If individuals thought are put forward through proper channel, there are more chances of getting some modifications done in the present law system, or altogether change them, but disobeying them right away can not be a good solution.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 180, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...they keep adding to the list, new laws, so as to accommodate its peoples best interests....
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Line 1, column 545, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es totally depend upon the perception of an individual. But to disobey laws which...
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Line 1, column 886, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...signed for everyone. A society includes a large number of people, every law set by authorities ca...
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Line 1, column 1087, Rule ID: IF_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...y the rules and after that if they feel if the particular law is not in their or m...
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Line 1, column 1140, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'societys the best'.
Suggestion: societys the best
...ular law is not in their or majority of societys best interest, they should find proper ways ...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... protest and try to change such laws. As mentioned above, rules and regulation...
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Line 2, column 60, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'considering the best'.
Suggestion: considering the best
...ve, rules and regulations are set after considering best interest of the people. But, the societ...
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Line 2, column 640, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the best'.
Suggestion: in the best
...n grounds and think that these laws are in best interest of America as a country. Now, ...
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Line 2, column 1006, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...r own reasons. If these people follow a more better way to put their thoughts as a communit...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...changes without disrupting the peace. Furthermore, governments need to have th...
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Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...ndustrialization near a residential area is of course not in the best interest of...
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Line 3, column 367, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...cause governing bodies need to consider economical growth of the society as whole, they ne...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ough proper channels will always help. Normally there are ways available to com...
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Line 4, column 169, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...hem. If there is none, a society should try and develop it, as it is the best way to in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, well, as to, at least, for example, of course, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 90.0 58.6224719101 154% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3113.0 2235.4752809 139% => OK
No of words: 648.0 442.535393258 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80401234568 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.04537849152 4.55969084622 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72893225188 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 215.323595506 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.425925925926 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 989.1 704.065955056 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.2591487308 60.3974514979 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.296296296 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219960387851 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069683670362 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632427387247 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137778689429 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644589349354 0.0667264976115 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.