Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
I disagree with the statement that "every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws". If every individual starts to question the justice system based on their personal ideas, it will only create chaos. People have their own personal perspective towards a lot of things like for some people wearing a helmet while driving might ruin their hair or say the look so they might not prefer to wear it but that's against the law, its only gonna increase the chances of getting killed if the person falls, there might be another group of people who might agree with civilians owning guns for self-defense but ignore the implications like the fear creates in the people of getting killed by some maniac because of some minor reason, owing directly to the increase in crime rates.
There can be a counter argument stating, it's the people who have the responsibility to obey or not obey just and unjust laws and they are completely responsible for the circumstances of it, so if their actions cross limits the authorities like the justice system can take care of it but aren't the people involved in the justice system people too, so aren't they allowed to have their own views on particular laws. Suppose there is a Judge who is going to be giving a sentence to a man who has been accused of killing his partner because of her torturing him to an extent that it was hampering his mental health, and what if the Judge is facing the same issues too, if he had the responsibility to obey or disobey laws he might even release the guilty even though killing a person is a crime, so indirectly this will only result in unsolvable conflicts that can end up with pretty bad circumstances. People should understand that the laws laid down by the Justice System are very well thought off and voted by majority to be laid down, yes, there are a few laws that are pretty old for the time and if a lot of people think it should be replaced then it should be. But this should happen with the majority's liking. If every person starts to obey laws that he feels are just then the basic ideas of living in a democracy would be questioned i.e the rule of the majority. Those are the reasons due to which I disagree with the statement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 411.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53771289538 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48223362529 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486618004866 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 23.0359550562 195% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 180.55839314 60.3974514979 299% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 207.222222222 118.986275619 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 45.6666666667 23.4991977007 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.97078651685 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218860996023 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114854912343 0.0831039109588 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10142626878 0.0758088955206 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174519929816 0.150359130593 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206287686454 0.0667264976115 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.8 14.1392134831 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 48.8420337079 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 12.1743820225 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.94 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 11.2143820225 178% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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