Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure

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Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

To form an society, the law is definately the basic substence in the country. through out the development of civil right, there are conflix between laws for year. based on an individual conscience, i can't completely agree with this claim. With more cogent reason to share below.

take communism as an example, the recent focused news is hong kong protest, againt the violation on one country, two system rule, those protester againt the law made by the government, which may harm the independency of hong kong's legal system. For the hk government, this is the 'just' law, for those who commit a crime shold face their consequence in mainland China, however, the citizen in hk insist to protect the independency of their legal system, due to the untrust to communism. When it comes to the legal problem might involved in ethic, human rights, and religious problem, i certainly support the peotest, prevent the law that the govenment try to pass through in order to get more control on people.

Somehow, one could not thinking thoroughly to the just law, based on their education background, and try to resist the 'just law', for example, people who working in a government will get paid after retired. however, the government face a bankruptcy problem due to the paying, and tried to reduce the money but still can let those who retired can afford their life for living. Maintaning the whole country for operation is the duty for all citizens, but for those people, resist the law cause the reduce of their money, who only care about an idividual's interest, may take it as an injust law. For that, based on one's ability to consider the whole benefit for country and population, sometimes its hard for both citizen and government to recognize what is just and what is not.

As in democratic country, all citizens have right to protect the just law, but not to fully obey it, remain questions about every law will help the government to make lasw that benefit all populations not just for one party or an individual. Thus, although i agree part of the claim that all citizen have responsibility to obey the just law, to question and resist the 'seems' just law is also our duty.

With those conflicts in law making, we can not garantee that every iddividual are satisfying about it, but what we can do is to definately obey those laws which protecting people and without violating the basic ethic, human rights, and democracy.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, thus, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 419.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84009546539 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52724233549 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503579952267 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.6669755159 60.3974514979 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.857142857 118.986275619 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9285714286 23.4991977007 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161801780214 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658475226035 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551237417956 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104451497207 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461047946602 0.0667264976115 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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