Governments should not fund any scientific research whose consequences are unclear.
Predicting the future is hard. Clearly, the fund for reseach is limited, and the government should use it in a clever way. however, the claim implies that government should only invest money on which the outcome is clearheaded. In some instances, it might be the right claim, it fails to adress other points which the fund in unclear research will help us build the civilization. Scientific in every field have the potential to greatly improve the quality of our lives at home, at work, and at play.
there's no garantee that all research will somehow get an optimistic outcome, especially the region of science, which has a wide rage of knowledges undiscovered. For instance, before the scientist develope an idea about the automatic car drive on the road, which not display as a toy, but as a helper in our daily life, we'll not know how much we can discover about artificial intelligence. when this ideas come to the world, we are not sure that the automatic cars can execute a series of codes, it has become possible to imagine that a technology tool presenting as a partner to human, also make some impressed consequence,not only reduce the possibility of car accidents causing by ts causing by the diver who are too tired but still need to drive back home, but also are a good friend to our ecosystem. but, still, when look back a few years, if we limited the government's funding for every research that is unknown, our technology development in automatic car will be constraint, and cause of losing the chance to live in a better world.
In other example, the research in producing an assessment of cognitive development in schizophrenia, which is an assessment tool, using an application for testing and promoting the cognitive ability for patients in schizophrenia. In this field of psychological world, the consequences of the research somehow easily get a futile outcome. however, the purpose for this application is to create a better easily get tool to help the patients to own their ability again, and to go back to society, and finally can be a part in their family. Though the fund for this application may come out for nothing, we just have to stay a positive attitude to develope it, take it as the only chance for them, for bigger purpose, thus, the government still needs to invest their money for this.
nevertheless, there are lots example for why the government should fund for the unclear consequence research, i can't gainsay that there are still many practical issue should the government do in order not to waste the money for nothing. before any research ask for fund, the government should only focus on which ws well prepared, well-organized, and the research than can benefit the all humankind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, still, thus, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2280.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 467.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88222698073 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80699711262 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503211991435 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 711.9 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.5519056825 60.3974514979 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.0 118.986275619 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1333333333 23.4991977007 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.21951772744 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240408833118 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907558764111 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920835559585 0.0758088955206 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17984864302 0.150359130593 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130263131313 0.0667264976115 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 14.1392134831 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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