There is little justification for society to make extraordinary efforts—especially at a great cost in money and jobs—to save endangered animal or plant species.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
As we all can agree, the everyday changes in our life does have impact on everything else on our planet . We all have learned in school the interdependence of all the living systems on each others . If we consider that, we all need to survive together in order to be able to survive longer and have a good life balance. To support this idea, it definitely becomes necessary to try and save endangered plant and animal species. But as the given argument says, doing it at a great cost may or may not be advisable at all times. It may depend upon circumstances, and should be decided accordingly. Hence, adopting the given claim effectively needs further scrutiny. As it is important to save endangered species, how much of it can be achieved in reality depends upon the respective circumstances.
To analyze implementation of given recommendation, we can discuss it with the help of some examples. Lets consider a case in which there is a small village which is situated by a wildlife reserve which has very important species if birds in it. And these species are out of the very few remaining in the world. This village is totally depends upon the tourism for economic gains. If the villagers gets a chance in which someone offers them a lot of money ,new jobs and help to prosper their tourism business, but in return of some land out of this wildlife reservoir, how they should react totally depends upon their need of economic help. The sell of land may cause harm to the endangered bird species, but the proposed business plan helps the economy of the village , it can be suggested that villagers should opt for accepting business offer. This scenario helps to better understand that, that decision of opting for endangered species at a cost of huge economic loss depends upon circumstances.
There is another case which could be helpful here, the white tigers are mainly found in east India. Now they are almost at the edge of vanishing from the list of living animals on our planet. Government of India is trying to put some efforts in order to save the last few animals of this species. But as India is a developing country, they might not support this campaign economically. In this case, there are some NGOs who appeal people all over the world to help and support this effort to save white tigers. As per the given statement, it might be difficult to make extraordinary efforts by some individual or a group of people, but if such efforts are taken on large scale and everybody supports a little, it can be successful at a very low cost .
There are people in the society who thinks caring for the species who are going to elope from the environment should not be given that much importance, as it does not effect our day to day life directly. But in order to keep balance in the nature system, every living species, may it be a plant or animal or human, is important. But as human life is growing more critical to live day by day , it becomes more difficult to care for each and every endangered species in the world. So to adopt given recommendation depends upon the situation, place and people. It is difficult to agree or disagree with the given statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, hence, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 58.6224719101 138% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2610.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 563.0 442.535393258 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63587921847 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87110059796 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63528052242 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449378330373 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 846.9 704.065955056 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.77640449438 507% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.438072803 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.384615385 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6538461538 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.38461538462 5.21951772744 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187435542989 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520478724775 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448499761289 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108700930489 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210350854649 0.0667264976115 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.