The main benefit of the study of history is to dispel the illusion that people living now are significantly different from people who lived in earlier times.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
From the dawn of human life, mankind is continuously evolving themselves physically and mentally. The topic raises a controversial issue that whether the main advantage from learning history is to remove the thinking that people are different in earlier times or not. Indisputably, some characters and habits are genetically gained which people are gaining from their ancetors. Nevertheless, human have evolved themselves a lot with respect to ancient times. Thus, it is insignificant to compare people living now with the humans of ancient times.
First of all, humans are the only people in the world who has the capability to think and then decide what to do. Due to their thinking, they are continuously evolving themselves in every aspect of life. For example, people of Great Britain would like to wear formal clothing in their earlier times. But now a days, they're pretty much interested in wearing causual clothing. Furthermore, ancient people are the people who always keep their word whatever they say, but now instead, people are much involved in fake promises which they would never been able to kept. Thus there is a huge difference in lifestyle of people in earlier times with respect to current world.
History is a great subject which taught us about the ancient people and their lives. When we compare those people with our lives, they were far more different from people living now. People now a days are much more dependent on technology apart from earlier times. Technology has changed the view people use to think and live their life. For instance, earlier people of 19th century would like to spend their time in listening music from radio, but now a days, people have ipods and smartphones with great noise cancellation power. There are so many apsects in which people differ from earlier times which are uncountable. All those lifestyle and cultures were only known by knowing their history.
Although there are a vast number of advantages about learning history like it gives a basic idea about a nation and its culture, the main benefit is to know about people living in hoary times so that we can compare themselves with current people. Furthermore, it reveals the names of some great people who have contributed a lot to their nation. Like Mahatma Gandhi, a great Indian leader in the midst of 90's. He had overthrew a whole empire without even a little bit of violence. Moreover, The great leader Abrahim Lincon was known as the most noble person in the history of America even after his involvement in the fierciest war America has even fought. These things are only known after studying the history of a specific nation.
In conclusion, although there are other sources from which we get to know about the earlier times like the stories from our ancestors about lifestyle of people living in earlier days, history taught us most about the lifestyle of people and how they've evolved from generation to generation. Although, there are other benefits as well of knowing history like it gives us the general idea about the nation, its culture and various languages used in that nation, the main advantage of it is to teach us significantly about the ancient lives of people so that we can compare the evolution of humans with respect to the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...al clothing in their earlier times. But now a days, theyre pretty much interested in weari...
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Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...lothing in their earlier times. But now a days, theyre pretty much interested in weari...
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Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...in their earlier times. But now a days, theyre pretty much interested in wearing causu...
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Line 3, column 566, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ich they would never been able to kept. Thus there is a huge difference in lifestyle...
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Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...ifferent from people living now. People now a days are much more dependent on technology a...
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Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...rent from people living now. People now a days are much more dependent on technology a...
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Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... Technology has changed the view people use to think and live their life. For insta...
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Line 5, column 450, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...time in listening music from radio, but now a days, people have ipods and smartphones with...
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Line 5, column 454, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... in listening music from radio, but now a days, people have ipods and smartphones with...
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Line 5, column 628, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this lifestyle' or 'those lifestyles'?
Suggestion: this lifestyle; those lifestyles
...arlier times which are uncountable. All those lifestyle and cultures were only known by knowing...
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Line 7, column 418, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'overthrown'.
Suggestion: overthrown
...dian leader in the midst of 90s. He had overthrew a whole empire without even a little bi...
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Line 7, column 458, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...overthrew a whole empire without even a little bit of violence. Moreover, The great leader...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they've
...t about the lifestyle of people and how theyve evolved from generation to generation. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, thus, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 90.0 58.6224719101 154% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2733.0 2235.4752809 122% => OK
No of words: 553.0 442.535393258 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94213381555 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84932490483 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48533988591 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.437613019892 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 860.4 704.065955056 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.1604247928 60.3974514979 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.115384615 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2692307692 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 5.21951772744 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346546459183 0.243740707755 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108868143679 0.0831039109588 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077983760641 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220374309893 0.150359130593 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687991179365 0.0667264976115 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.