major cities
Major cities are the backbone of every country, as they provide employment to a lot of people, a major contributor to the country's economy. These cities contribute more to GDP as compared to any other cities, having more amenities when compared to others. These cities are the dream cities for many not only across the country but across the globe because they are getting much more as they could not get in their city. And all this cannot be possible without government financial support.
Investors from all over the world try to invest in major cities of any country. Many people come from various places in the country in search of employment, as they will get a lot of opportunities in these cities. They are the hub for various MNC and most of the startups were started there only, for Example, California is among the major cities of the USA and most of the startups that are now a big giant in the corporate world were stated there only like Google, Facebook, Microsoft, etc. For a country to make its major cities popular among the tourist, investors, they have to provide financial support to these cities so they can thrive.
Providing financial assistance to these cities does not mean focus on these cities only and doing nothing for others. Yes, the government has to focus more on major cities as they are contributing more to the growth of a country in various ways, but they also try to make other cities of a country as their major one. And for this, they have to focus on other cities also, by providing financial support to them, for example, the GDP of California alone is around 2 trillion dollars alone, which is more than the many countries in the world, but the USA is not only focusing alone on California, they try to make others state like California.
Whenever we heard any country name , the first thing that comes into our mind is their major countries, for example, if we talk about the USA the name that came's into mid is California or New York, not even the capital. So, we can also say that a country is known for its major cities and its government duty to make them world class and famous and this can be possible if they get financial support form the government of there country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 384, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Line 9, column 528, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e, which is more than the many countries in the world, but the USA is not only fo...
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Line 13, column 35, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... Whenever we heard any country name , the first thing that comes into our min...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 398.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6256281407 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34418786333 2.79657885939 84% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43216080402 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.4267432382 60.3974514979 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.615384615 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6153846154 23.4991977007 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36460996513 0.243740707755 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179264310018 0.0831039109588 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132832186716 0.0758088955206 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274723123778 0.150359130593 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631180515566 0.0667264976115 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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