Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system because
moral behavior cannot be legislated.
The author stated that laws cannot solve the myriad of modern society problems because moral behavior cannot be legislated. I agree with the author full heartedly. Although laws do correct many of the immoral behavior that is harmful to the society but there are many things that cannot be legislated and these things should be eradicated by the combined effort of the society.
Admittedly, there are many ways in which laws help the functioning of a healthy society. Laws do help people to live a better life by serving in various domains like catching thieves, murderers and charlatans. Without any law and order, there would be complete bedlam and chaos.
Yet, there are many pressing issues of the present society that cannot be solved by the legislation. One of the issues is the increase in the number of old age people who live alone. In many of countries, it is a significant issue as it is causing depression among many old people due to loneliness. It has aroused because life has become busy nowadays and people do have less time to spend with their parents or many people leave their parents alone because they fell that they are a burden on them. The society should encourage people to keep their parents with them or at least go and meet them on a regular basis so that old people do not feel lone.
Secondly, the school along with society should teach the children to respect other people beliefs and notions. The children should learn to treat every human with respect regardless of their creed, religion and race. These values and mores are significant for the development of any society because people should collaborate with each other in order to have a thriving society. A society in which tolerance is not encourage can have many ill effects that can lead to disastrous things such as riots and loots.
Finally, society should encourage people to be compassionate about indigent people and help them. Obviously, we cannot have a law to dictate people to help the needy people, but the cultivation of these values among masses can play a significant role in a thriving society. The affluent people should reach out to the indigent in order to assist them and give them a better life. These things are especially important in developing countries where governments are struggling to provide basic amenities to the poor. The rich people can do a plethora of things for poor such as they can build hospitals, schools and colleges.
The laws are needed for the functioning of a smooth society but there are many things in the society which cannot be addressed. The society should play a significant role in order to eradicate the moral values in people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 416, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'encouraged'.
Suggestion: encouraged
...ty. A society in which tolerance is not encourage can have many ill effects that can lead...
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Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... the society which cannot be addressed. The society should play a significant role ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, second, secondly, so, at least, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2223.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 459.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8431372549 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49667689392 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440087145969 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 701.1 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0597693948 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.045454545 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8636363636 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.59090909091 5.21951772744 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288208507947 0.243740707755 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104152463644 0.0831039109588 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149810413022 0.0758088955206 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194577378937 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.164151020891 0.0667264976115 246% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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