"Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system because
moral behavior cannot be legislated."
The statement given here is that we cannot have a law for everything and for all the problems we have in modern society and specifically when we talk about moral behavior, which cannot be legalized. I agree with the statement. We cannot legalize moral behavior, it depends on various aspects like the kind of family values given, financial background, education received and kind of surroundings we are living in like friends, relatives, society, etc.
There is no law for value education. In our society people are being so judgemental they behave in whatever way they want to behave there is no such law which people should follow. According to my perspective, one new law should be introduced in which if you are the manager then you should talk politely with your employee you should give respect to your juniors and seniors no matter how and at what position you are. Every work is work and every work requires hard work and that hard work should be respected.
In today's world, there are several problems that cannot be solved by law. Suppose there are a number of students in a school and some of them are good, average and below-average then the teacher also made their perspective according to the student performance they do not see the hard work behind those students who are trying to improve and want to do well in their life everyone deserves same value and respect.
Laws are made for physical violence and for fraud not for emotional problems which are becoming the biggest problem in our society.
In the end, I once again agree with the above statement and believe that moral values depend on the kind of background you are coming from, values you are inheriting from your parents, friends' relatives, ideals.No matter how the bigger person you are if you don't have value education the turning point will come where you will lack. Law can only punish, once it observes you behaving unethically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 330.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83636363636 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47795792581 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530303030303 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 103.681403025 60.3974514979 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183258768203 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838181204029 0.0831039109588 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10288624875 0.0758088955206 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972571711722 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620095131552 0.0667264976115 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.