Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
The society that we live in, has evolved in so many ways when it comes to treating men and women equally in terms of various aspects. It has been the goal of many revolutionists in the past to bring in equal rights for the women. But i strongly feel that , despite having almost equal rights for men and women in various aspects, there are still some tasks that are meant only for the men. I do not consider this as a partiality shown towards men as the tasks require certain physical abilities that men naturally have more when compared to women.
By nature , men and women are made differently in terms of physical abilities. Men has got more physical power than women and that is one of the major reasons why there are certain tasks or activities that are only meant for the men. In the ancient times, women are restricted to household chores like cooking and taking good care of the kids, while men wander in the wild jungle to obtain food and other essential things that are needed for the survival. Considering the fact that the jungle is filled with threatening wild animals, it is very uncertain about the dangerous situations that a man has to encounter in the jungle. This clearly explains why things are the way they are when it comes to doing some survival tasks like this.
Men have the unique ability of sustaining even in the most adverse conditions. This is one of the main reasons why certain roles are limited only to men. Women might be as equally strong as men, but men have always got the upper hand in doing the kind of tasks that requires high physical endurance. Tasks that require physical power more than mental power like carrying goods, serving as a soldier in the country border where he has to be ready to fight at any time are more suitable for men.
Most of the truck drivers who drive those heavy vehicles that weigh tons together are mostly men as they are the ones who have got the physical power to handle those hard steering wheels for hours together during large journeys.
Even though in this modern world, people striving hard to establish equality among men and women for various aspects, there is still certain jobs or roles that are meant only for the men. Furthermore, it more practical to say that few things are better to be done by men rather than women considering the physical advantage that men have got by nature to especially do these kinds of jobs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, still, while, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1978.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 432.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5787037037 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2423557797 2.79657885939 80% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469907407407 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2791395395 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.625 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368166430479 0.243740707755 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147189463621 0.0831039109588 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864764594264 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226134802256 0.150359130593 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091834126556 0.0667264976115 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 48.8420337079 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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