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Unexamined Conservatism is far more dangerous than reckless change

More often than not, a buzz word is always intertwining our mind that the word is changing, that’s why we have to be malleable to take it up. Virtually the outdated fashion at present loses their appeal, but some non-iconoclastic people grab it so enthusiastically that we clearly feel ashamed to ponder how this can be possible. Here it is noticeable that, they are enamored of such trivial caste and creed that it sometimes deems that we can better to embellish by dint of reckless change, which is why , I personally substantiate my logic to prove the above statement in respect of it favor.

To embark on, conservatism is well satisfactory matter to underpin the fundamental off our life. Due to conservatism we make our self a distinct caste or anything else according to own society. However I am not talking about such sacrosanct belief rather I am pressurizing to tell that conservatism if it is in the onward auspicious direction then it is well satisfied. But if any one attach to it blindly then his mentality hoes wrong. For instance, in India there is a system to marry to the caste to caste. If any person tries to eschew the rule , he or she has to be reprimanded harshly, even if most of the times he was proscribed. What I mean by this is that if two people marry each other without violating the rule of social rules, no problem to others. Turning to the other side of this argument, if this radical change is squared with people, then its success will be gained more easily. In Punjab, a pariah caste they now discard their rule of society based rule, as a result people easily get accustomed to modern availability.

Furthermore, to be headstrong in such obsolete rule , we can limit our boundary of life from the social improvement. On the contrary reckless change can create such a happenstance that cannot be said in a sentence. From my personal experience, in Bangladesh in 1990 television was prohibited as the elders of the society holder thought it can hamper drastically their moral belief and customs. No sooner advanced society had grabbed it than reckless changer to hearing information, merriment for the case of lived portent, television was a key of success of nation. In respect of it if we look at the narrow-minded people they are now living in an unsociable life.

Last but not least, new horizon is always aspiring if we can tackle it in a rounded way. Moreover, reckless change can make the space of this world’s dynamicity a new path of Orland. The change of Malaysia is an ideal example of it. What a unprecedented development in the dimension in the science and technology of their social aspects. For example, when Mahathor mohammad enthroned to the power, he abruptly change their all outdated system. In case of social structure rail system, economic banking, road system, tech-intrusion in a well-planned manner that we feel what a glimpse of a moment as just between two decades such reckless change grow their people in a new sunshine. So it is clearly understood that reckless change is passionate not restive. Likewise it is one kind of marigold which comes after a season but its fragrance makes us balmy.

To wrap it up, it is very tough to take a decision of this open ended question, but my logic is clearly touched on the positive direction of it. Now it is momentous that we surely like to be adjuvant of these modern conveniences. In the conservatism, we lose our distinctness and independence, reckless change shows us our space to be developed.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 505, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...by dint of reckless change, which is why , I personally substantiate my logic to p...
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Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...anything else according to own society. However I am not talking about such sacrosanct ...
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Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...ction then it is well satisfied. But if any one attach to it blindly then his mentality...
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Line 3, column 549, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
.... If any person tries to eschew the rule , he or she has to be reprimanded harshly...
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Line 6, column 52, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., to be headstrong in such obsolete rule , we can limit our boundary of life from ...
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Line 8, column 72, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a rounded way" with adverb for "rounded"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... is always aspiring if we can tackle it in a rounded way. Moreover, reckless change can make the...
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Line 8, column 239, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...alaysia is an ideal example of it. What a unprecedented development in the dimens...
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Line 8, column 411, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'changes'.
Suggestion: changes
...mad enthroned to the power, he abruptly change their all outdated system. In case of s...
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Line 8, column 532, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a well-planned manner" with adverb for "well-planned"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ic banking, road system, tech-intrusion in a well-planned manner that we feel what a glimpse of a moment...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, likewise, look, moreover, so, then, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, i mean, kind of, talking about, as a result, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 79.0 33.0505617978 239% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 86.0 58.6224719101 147% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2910.0 2235.4752809 130% => OK
No of words: 610.0 442.535393258 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77049180328 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.96972615649 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89517125768 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 315.0 215.323595506 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516393442623 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 928.8 704.065955056 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.38483146067 251% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1833694101 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.928571429 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17857142857 5.21951772744 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148728237313 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403343233945 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464880477171 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803781942877 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251461011214 0.0667264976115 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 154.0 100.480337079 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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