Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to add

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Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

In this issue the author cites that men and women are not equally suited for many tasks due to their inherent physical. By this claim, the author wants to raise a valid point that why men is appointed over women in physical kind of works. We know that in today's world, women want equal status as men. But physical differences is main key which undermine feminism. Thus, I support the author's claim that women and men are not equally suited for certain kind of jobs which is required more physical strength.

First, I support this claim, because of physical strength of men and women are never going to same. To support this claim, i want to give an example of job in automobile company's production department. In this kind of job one need mental as well as physical strength to perform job effectively. If in a company there is need to transfer some kind of heavy goods from one place to another place, men can do it with minimum help of other person compare to women. So, from this example, we can say that difference in physical strength of men and women plays an important role during employment.

Second, I support this claim, because of effectiveness of men over women in some kind of social activities or sports. We can take example of Olympics. In Olympics we take world record of some physical game for both men and women. We can clearly cite that men's records are better than women's. This shows us that physical strength of men and women is not at same level. Hence, we can say that men dominates women in some kind of physical tasks.

Although, men dominates over women in real world for physical strength, there are some women who show dominance over men. Like, we can take example of Merricom who wins bronze medal in 2012 Olympics which was held in china. Although she is of 32 years old at that time, she shows incredible strength which is not shown by men.

At the end, i just want to tell that indifference of men and women strength plays vital role in some physical tasks. But we can't ignore physical strength of women completely.We have to consider it.

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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'kind of', 'as well as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.287104622871 0.240241500013 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.133819951338 0.157235817809 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0827250608273 0.0880659088768 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.036496350365 0.0497285424764 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0413625304136 0.0444667217837 93% => OK
Prepositions: 0.160583941606 0.12292977631 131% => OK
Participles: 0.0170316301703 0.0406280797675 42% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.35724079747 2.79330140395 84% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0267639902676 0.030933414821 87% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0656934306569 0.0997080785238 66% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.014598540146 0.0249443105267 59% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0194647201946 0.0148568991511 131% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2082.0 2732.02544248 76% => OK
No of words: 373.0 452.878318584 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.581769437 6.0361032391 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.281501340483 0.366273622748 77% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.203753351206 0.280924506359 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.142091152815 0.200843997647 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0643431635389 0.132149295362 49% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.35724079747 2.79330140395 84% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 219.290929204 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469168900804 0.48968727796 96% => OK
Word variations: 49.2352819398 55.4138127331 89% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.7619047619 23.380412469 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5995272146 59.4972553346 51% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1428571429 141.124799967 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7619047619 23.380412469 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.47619047619 0.674092028746 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 38.1372398825 51.4728631049 74% => OK
Elegance: 2.19540229885 1.64882698954 133% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376980632895 0.391690518653 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.141665072176 0.123202303941 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0962344587158 0.077325440228 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.552750232413 0.547984918172 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.120861994327 0.149214159877 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15510752589 0.161403998019 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088364168548 0.0892212321368 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.393022565042 0.385218514788 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0850692061369 0.0692045440612 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257092388447 0.275328986314 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770268108199 0.0653680567796 118% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.4325221239 144% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 7.22455752212 180% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.5995575221 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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