Some people believe it is often necessary, even desirable, for political leaders to withhold information from the public. Others believe that the public has a right to be fully informed.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The author raises the controversial issue that political leaders should give information to public or not. To withhold information from the public, sometimes it is necessary because it can increase negativity between people in condition of emergancy. However, I believe that the public has a right to be fully informed. Moreover, they come across what is happening in the country? How political leaders do their duty for public.
First of all, political leaders should have informed all information to the public. Thus, public came to know how the work for their development is going on? Public interests in political issue flourish and they are also informed every detail for development of society. For example, India's prime minister Mr. Narendra Modi initiates "Swatchh Bharat Abhiyan", public should have been informed by this initiative. So, they also participate in equally and sucessfully carry out this agenda. Hence, every new agenda or initiative by government must be familiar to public by political leaders.
Furthermore, there is another reason to supprot this claim. For example, political leaders carry out some international bonds to other country and they have not informed this to public. The public cannot come to know sucess of particular government. Thus, for their own profit political leader should inform public about their sucess as a governing political party. This can increase their chance to come again in power as a governing political party.
Although, public should be informed by political pundits. There are many sensitive cases in which political leader withhold information from the public. For example, America's president Barak Obama has not informed public about their secret mission to kill Osama Bin Laden. So, they successfully imply their mission. If they inform this to public, there is possibility that one of Laden's servant came to know this and warned him with this mission. This might result in failure of such a great mission.
In conclusion, I just want to say that public should be informed each and every details except secret mission or documents. This can increase faithfulness of the public in government and also carry out secret mission successfully without any kind of failure.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ower as a governing political party. Although, public should be informed by political...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'thus', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230769230769 0.240241500013 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.151364764268 0.157235817809 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0918114143921 0.0880659088768 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0545905707196 0.0497285424764 110% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0446650124069 0.0444667217837 100% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114143920596 0.12292977631 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0347394540943 0.0406280797675 86% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74056278673 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0372208436725 0.030933414821 120% => OK
Particles: 0.00744416873449 0.0016655270985 447% => OK
Determiners: 0.0818858560794 0.0997080785238 82% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.029776674938 0.0249443105267 119% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0124069478908 0.0148568991511 84% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2254.0 2732.02544248 83% => OK
No of words: 355.0 452.878318584 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.34929577465 6.0361032391 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.430985915493 0.366273622748 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.295774647887 0.280924506359 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.225352112676 0.200843997647 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.143661971831 0.132149295362 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74056278673 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 219.290929204 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495774647887 0.48968727796 101% => OK
Word variations: 52.0258024464 55.4138127331 94% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6194690265 116% => OK
Sentence length: 14.7916666667 23.380412469 63% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2812886549 59.4972553346 54% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9166666667 141.124799967 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7916666667 23.380412469 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.541666666667 0.674092028746 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 44.3691314554 51.4728631049 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.51485148515 1.64882698954 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412012352433 0.391690518653 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0914230960318 0.123202303941 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.072627028749 0.077325440228 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.461329259696 0.547984918172 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.120985278639 0.149214159877 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147777119993 0.161403998019 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10036437117 0.0892212321368 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.385836490168 0.385218514788 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0197417591741 0.0692045440612 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27586147641 0.275328986314 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121103490714 0.0653680567796 185% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88274336283 266% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 11.0 2.70907079646 406% => Less neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 20.0 13.5995575221 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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