The most effective way to understand contemporary culture is to analyze the trends of its youth.
Culture defines ideas,customs and social behaviour of people. Here the author claims that the most efficacious way to understand culture is to analyze youth trends.But society includes people of all age groups so to understand the modern culture it is imperative to analyze`trends of youth as well as elderly people who also form significant part of our society.
To begin with, the defined age range of the term Youth varies even between countries itself eg: 15-24, 15-30 and so on. Nevertheless even if consider higher range of 15 to 30 still they form only a small part of society. So comprehensive analysis on all age groups of modern culture is must in understanding it.
Young people are more flamboyant and their fashion styles,interests and behaviour attracts the media and the media automatically create an impression that they predominantly define modern culture.In reality their beliefs,interests tend to change more frequently and few of them get to adapt it quickly than the others so it is very difficult to understand latest beliefs,customs they follow.On the other hand, when we study the elder or older age groups we could see lot of customs and beliefs which are followed till date and they form a significant part of current modern culture like thanksgiving day and other traditions etc..
On the other hand, some might even argue that Youth also influence others in following or in keeping up with their traditions For instance Social media and other technological advancements which connects people virtually. Eventhough elderly people follow them or ready to get used to them but still they are more comfortable and also inclined in following connecting with people face to face rather than virtually.One more example to quote is the pop music culture which is predominant nowadays but the elders are still inclined to the classical part of it. So if one studies only the youth they will not get the entire perspective of contemporary culture.
To recapitulate, the effective way to understand contemporary culture is to study the ideas, beliefs and customs of different age groups and not restricting to one group which appears to be predominant and which is not consistent and will lead to a obscure understanding on culture.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'for instance', 'as well as', 'to begin with', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239898989899 0.240241500013 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.159090909091 0.157235817809 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.111111111111 0.0880659088768 126% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0808080808081 0.0497285424764 162% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0530303030303 0.0444667217837 119% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0934343434343 0.12292977631 76% => OK
Participles: 0.0277777777778 0.0406280797675 68% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.09451458206 2.79330140395 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0505050505051 0.030933414821 163% => OK
Particles: 0.00252525252525 0.0016655270985 152% => OK
Determiners: 0.0631313131313 0.0997080785238 63% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0126262626263 0.0249443105267 51% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0176767676768 0.0148568991511 119% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2262.0 2732.02544248 83% => OK
No of words: 368.0 452.878318584 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.14673913043 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.347826086957 0.366273622748 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.258152173913 0.280924506359 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182065217391 0.200843997647 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.14402173913 0.132149295362 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09451458206 2.79330140395 111% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 219.290929204 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497282608696 0.48968727796 102% => OK
Word variations: 52.8641086905 55.4138127331 95% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6194690265 44% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 40.8888888889 23.380412469 175% => OK
Sentence length SD: 236.027828449 59.4972553346 397% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 251.333333333 141.124799967 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.8888888889 23.380412469 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.22222222222 0.674092028746 181% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.21349557522 249% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 66.7041062802 51.4728631049 130% => OK
Elegance: 1.23275862069 1.64882698954 75% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.507296527828 0.391690518653 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.181437714958 0.123202303941 147% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0876609484378 0.077325440228 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.677686077007 0.547984918172 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.233127116013 0.149214159877 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.251579167471 0.161403998019 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151737982495 0.0892212321368 170% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.346863009501 0.385218514788 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0520815350275 0.0692045440612 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.34809907536 0.275328986314 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120122725313 0.0653680567796 184% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.4325221239 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 13.5995575221 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.