A nation should not require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college
A common saying is that education is the backbone of a nation. While some people can argue that a nation should not require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college, but others would state that government should offer a same national curriculum to all its student before they entered into the college. In my view, government should offer same curriculum system for all its student before they enter into college.
Education is very important part for every citizen of the society. All student will be one day work for the society, for its people and developing it with their knowledge. In every sector of the society we need educated person to develop in our future. In every profession we need to improve ourself in these age of modern science. And for these reason we need a same national curriculum education system before our student entered into the college. Because, when they learn in a same national curriculum then there are no diversification in education quality at different parts of the country. All student learn the same lessons and all kind of subject would be taught to all student.
If a student wanted to a doctor in his future then he also need some basic lavel of knowledge about ethics, relegion, culture and history. Because these are the basic knowledge which will shape him to be a good doctor as well as a good human being. In many developing country like Bangladesh, India, Nepal there are about more than 50% of government employ are corrupted. No doubt that they are the top class educated person in their country. They have enough degree and ongoing course how to be a good employee from their department. But all these effort will value less in reality because their basic education will not provide them enough knowledge about ethics and values. In these country student are tought only their group subject mostly physics, chemistry, math and biology. So before they entered into college they are much more professional that they can't even think about other people sufferings.
Though for a good engineer a student must have deep knowledge about his group subject, but for a good human being and great professional he also need some basic subject like sociology, economics, relegion and ethics etc. To fulfill their aim they always need their professional knowledge. Because without enough knowledge in their core subject they can not be a good professional.
In conclusion, a nation should require same national curriculum for its all student untill their college which will help them a good professional person and also make them a good human being too.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...y physics, chemistry, math and biology. So before they entered into college they are much...
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...ways need their professional knowledge. Because without enough knowledge in their core ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, while, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2198.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 444.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95045045045 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49086065834 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.436936936937 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 697.5 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5586645867 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9090909091 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428624691518 0.243740707755 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123685418433 0.0831039109588 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16735087174 0.0758088955206 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289416311645 0.150359130593 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.218938590098 0.0667264976115 328% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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