Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.
A common saying is that education is the backbone of a nation. While some people can argue that tuition should not imposed on student who can not afford it, but others would state that government should offer a free education to all admitted university student. In my view, government should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted and not who cannot afford it.
Education is very important part for every citizen of the society. But proper education is not free for all, where sometimes its very costly that many of us don’t even think about it. A statistic indicates that in USA, every semester cost almost $20000 for undergraduate student. Which is very expensive for any student, who want to pursue a bachelor’s degree. For many developing and underdeveloped country this high tuition fee is burden for any student. Besides tuition fee a student spent a lot of money for transportation, accommodation, health insurance and many other contributions. Which is very difficult to manage for any student and their parents.
Many European university offers free tuition fee university education for all student who get admitted to their university. Germany is a leading country to offering free tuition university for all, which is very appreciable. They also allowed student to do off campus job to support their accommodation and other expenses. That’s why many talented students from different countries thrive themselves to get free education with great enthusiasm.
On the other hand, north American country, sometimes offer tuition waiver to some student who can not afford tuition fee. Sometimes scholarship and other research funding offering to some of the most talented student who got admission in the university. But, most of the student have to pay a huge amount of tuition fee to complete their education. Where USA government can not allow their student to work outside their campus. How can they manage it then? Well, this expensive educational cost sometimes creates a great burden for students as well as their parents also.
Although, tuition fee is a great source of income for every university. Many infrastructure and administrative expenses use this tuition revenue which is very essential for the institution. And sometimes tuition free university greatly depends on their sponsorship and grants. But, respective to all this issue, government should take necessary steps to mitigate the tuition fee not only the student who are not afford their tuition fee but also all students who get admission to any university.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'impose'
Suggestion: impose
...eople can argue that tuition should not imposed on student who can not afford it, but o...
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Line 4, column 350, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...uition fee to complete their education. Where USA government can not allow their stud...
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Line 4, column 567, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...n for students as well as their parents also. Although, tuition fee is a great s...
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Line 4, column 573, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...students as well as their parents also. Although, tuition fee is a great source ...
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Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun infrastructure seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many infrastructures'.
Suggestion: Many infrastructures
... source of income for every university. Many infrastructure and administrative expenses use this tu...
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Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'afforded'.
Suggestion: afforded
...on fee not only the student who are not afford their tuition fee but also all students...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, then, thus, well, while, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 12.9106741573 225% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2174.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 414.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25120772947 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87192684095 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.449275362319 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 692.1 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1402921708 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5833333333 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.472408627733 0.243740707755 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155012971142 0.0831039109588 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.180583684328 0.0758088955206 238% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.336388740694 0.150359130593 224% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.196432403566 0.0667264976115 294% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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