Claim: Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's major field of study.
Reason: Acquiring knowledge of various academic disciplines is the best way to become truly educated.
Knowledge is power. For make our knowledge more effective we need to know a diversity of education through different types of subject out of our major field of study.
First, a variety of knowledge is needed not only for our educational background but also our job too. Now a days every corporate office needed engineer who have enough knowledge about business policy, supply chain management, administration and office work presentation. For example, a airline needed an engineer who have a relevant bachelor degree and also know the law and legislation part of the aircraft and airport. If one day, he became a executive then he need to know about business administration also.
Secondly, every high school student should know about different subject before they decide their major subject. We live in an age of modern science where every citizen has some responsibilities towards society. If a school student does not learn about the basic subject like sociology, religion, ethics then it will increase the corruption tendency amongst them. Nonetheless, when a student doesn’t experience different types of subject then how can they choose their major discipline of study.
Though sometimes its time consuming to study different subject alone with major subject of passion. But a sufficient amount of knowledge in necessary in different field of study for understanding the diversity of different subject and which one is to choose for major. But after that stage when you are decided to learn your major then its not logical to study variety of course.
In conclusion, Its appreciable to learn variety of course outside your major but you have to focused what you wanted to do in your future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 102, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...tional background but also our job too. Now a days every corporate office needed engineer ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 106, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...al background but also our job too. Now a days every corporate office needed engineer ...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 284, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... office work presentation. For example, a airline needed an engineer who have a r...
^
Line 2, column 443, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...raft and airport. If one day, he became a executive then he need to know about bu...
^
Line 2, column 506, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...d to know about business administration also. Secondly, every high school student s...
^^^^
Line 3, column 500, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...choose their major discipline of study. Though sometimes its time consuming to study d...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.5258426966 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 277.0 442.535393258 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16606498195 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80878026358 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545126353791 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.015839878 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.214285714 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.21951772744 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158367968682 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589796703784 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389543724745 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896543195889 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347936379969 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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