The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries.
Grate people will remembered by their work they have done in their lifetime. Their work will make them alive after their death. Everybody remembers great people not for their contemporaries but their good concern for the sack of our society and their contribution toward our society.
There are many great men in various field but all of them one thing is common between them that, they always dedicate their life for others. All their work is offered for the common people like us. That’s the only reason that people remember them for their work after their existence. For example, in the art field many grates artist is famous for their work like Leonardo de Vinci. His work Monalisa is world famous. People remember his name for this great done by him. Where we hardly know his fellow contemporaries. In science and technology sector many great scientists like Thomas alba Edison, the inventor of electricity who is awarded 1093 U.S. patents across a variety of technology. We live in an age of modern science. Where we can easily search anything in internet and get the result instant. So, in this modern world our work easily represents ourselves not by our fellow contemporaries. After our death our good work can make us immortal like the great people.
There are many great poets is famous for their excellent art and earns a lot of respect through it. If your work is good enough for praise, then the world will remember you after your death. Where nobody will not be remembered by their contemporaries. Though sometimes people get famous by their fellow contemporaries and fans. Sometimes good friends introduced an introverted talented person throughout the world. When their good fellow plays an important rule to transfer the idea, but main concerned thing is his work. If his work is not good enough then his contemporaries could not play any rule in that. Though today we life in a world where we can easily denote our talent in many online media very easily. Where we don’t need any other help to introduce our self through the world.
In conclusion, I would like to end that every great work of any person makes him great man after his death. Where his contemporaries play a very negligible rule in his journey.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'remember'
Suggestion: remember
Grate people will remembered by their work they have done in their l...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'grates'' or 'gratis's'?
Suggestion: grates'; gratis's
...nce. For example, in the art field many grates artist is famous for their work like Le...
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Message: “Where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...er his name for this great done by him. Where we hardly know his fellow contemporarie...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...elves not by our fellow contemporaries. After our death our good work can make us imm...
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Message: “Where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rld will remember you after your death. Where nobody will not be remembered by their ...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
..., but main concerned thing is his work. If his work is not good enough then his co...
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Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...raries could not play any rule in that. Though today we life in a world where we can e...
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Message: “Where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...on makes him great man after his death. Where his contemporaries play a very negligib...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a very negligible rule in his journey.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 33.0505617978 185% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 384.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84895833333 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5196924071 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473958333333 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9416733964 60.3974514979 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.6153846154 118.986275619 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7692307692 23.4991977007 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.73076923077 5.21951772744 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223000730352 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713848243672 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636681120913 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145938147058 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570274390131 0.0667264976115 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 14.1392134831 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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