Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country.
Education is the backbone of a nation. For proper education, evolution of educational structure and modern learning process through different curriculum every student should spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country. Which enriched their boundary of knowledge and change their primitive learning procedure.
In the process of learning any subject there are some syllabus of theories and some practical modules. Different country has different study structure and curriculum to teach their students. So, it’s very important for any student to acquire knowledge about his subjective studies as well as different process of learning throughout the world. For this reason, a student should spend at least one of his semesters in a foreign university or college. Assume an engineering student who study automotive in his native country Bangladesh. Where he spends most of his time in learning different theories and some essential practical classes. But when he goes for higher study after his bachelor to any country like Germany, he should take many software related compulsory course which he did not completed in his bachelor. So, here we can see that if the student spends one of his semesters in any foreign country he will know about the required courses and learn them.
During the study in a foreign country, every student must habituate with the foreign culture and lifestyle. They could link with a range of professionals and worked with them. By this he can increase his opportunity in a range of job market.
Though Sometimes money is a big issue for persuading a semester in a foreign country. But it can be mitigated by applying for scholarship process. Language could be another barrier for foreign education but learning a foreign language will paid of in the end. Because it increases his job opportunity in that particular country though.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'syllabi', 'syllabuses'?
Suggestion: syllabi; syllabuses
... of learning any subject there are some syllabus of theories and some practical modules....
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Line 3, column 740, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...ny country like Germany, he should take many software related compulsory course whi...
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Line 3, column 740, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun software seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much software', 'a good deal of software'.
Suggestion: much software; a good deal of software
...ny country like Germany, he should take many software related compulsory course which he did...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ny, he should take many software related compulsory course which he did not compl...
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Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'complete'
Suggestion: complete
...ted compulsory course which he did not completed in his bachelor. So, here we can see th...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'pay'
Suggestion: pay
...on but learning a foreign language will paid of in the end. Because it increases his...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, at least, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 302.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22847682119 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75937505518 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519867549669 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6816912136 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7222222222 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 5.21951772744 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342065655044 0.243740707755 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10803874329 0.0831039109588 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135073891076 0.0758088955206 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207807290822 0.150359130593 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102931981612 0.0667264976115 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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