Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.
A common saying is that focus on the solution, not the problem. While some people can argue that government should focus on anticipated problems, but others would state that government should concentrate to solve the immediate problems. In my view, government should focus on its immediate problems which will mitigate the probability of future problems too.
Firstly, developing country like Bangladesh, India, Pakistan and others Asian country have many severe problems such as political, financial, health, education and other sectors. Corruption is the main problem for every sector of this nations. If government should not take some immediate necessary steps to solve these problems than it will anticipate some acute problems in future.
Secondly, Unemployment problem is now a top-rated problem in the underdeveloped and developing country. A statistic state that, every year in India unemployment rate is almost one and half percent grater than previous one. Though this problem is not solved by immediate action, government should start necessary steps to convert its manpower into assets. Otherwise, in upcoming future unemployed problem will be the great anticipated problem for the country.
Today, Bangladesh is facing Rohingya issue and the main cause behind this problem is not taking immediate steps by Myanmar. If the Myanmar government focus on their immediate problem, then this Rohingya issue will be solved by this time. Sometimes avoiding the expected problem will create some worst situation like this. If the government of Bangladesh would not support the fled Rohingya people then, it will not experience such anticipated problems. So, its very crucial for any government to take some action to solve their immediate problems.
In conclusion, concern about expected problem is good for any nation, but every nation should focus on their immediate problem. Nevertheless, this present problem can create a huge anticipated problem in the upcoming future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, while, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 58.6224719101 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 303.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55115511551 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73085907796 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49504950495 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6310785931 60.3974514979 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.9411764706 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 5.21951772744 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 5.13820224719 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.51165510773 0.243740707755 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188947532954 0.0831039109588 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107779512137 0.0758088955206 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.333131459119 0.150359130593 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567711144217 0.0667264976115 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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